ChloeMissesYou · 1 decade ago
WOW! GREAT STORYYY

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vangster120 · 1 decade ago
ahhh ok
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amyvalverde5 · 1 decade ago
love the story!! :) keep on writing
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MexshicanTaco · 1 decade ago
haha yoru story was great !!
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MexshicanTaco · 1 decade ago
omg thanks !!

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vangster120 · 1 decade ago
hey:) its pretty good! but i think you need to add more... drama or, u need to add something that would really get a readers attention. make her get a boyfriend or something, otherwise its really good! keep it up:)
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