New story ideas: Which one?

#1 Don't Take Me

In the summer of 2003, Rachel Hobstag went missing. She held a diary, in which she wrote of everything that happened. Brutal actions, distinct plans and plots, and her feelings. There were others; she told of them as well. She needed to get out, to escape the pain and terror- for the people that held her and 7 other innocent teenage girls were doing cruel, cruel things. And in her diary, holds her story- all of it. From the day she got the diary, 'til the day she put it to rest.

And you get to read it.

#2 Soar

I was perfect, happy. I had probably the best life out of all the high schoolers in my town. I had an amazing boyfriend, Chris. My grades were good, everyone was nice, everything was going great.
But one day, November 9th, I caught Chris making out with some other chick from school. I thought I loved him, I thought he loved me. My life was over.
Until Quincy Jones came to town, November 17.
We clicked instantly- he was perfect, better than Chris. We started hanging out a lot, then eventually started going out. When we started getting really serious- like 10 months or so- he asked me if I wanted to go to Kalia Franchetti's party. Sounds stupid, right? Wrong. That party- changed my life forever.
I did things I can't ever undo.
But I love Quincy Jones.
And I'll do anything for him.

comment which one?

sorry i just needed to repost this i'm going to probably start writing both of them today(:

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