The tears I've cried
for far to long,
The pain I hide is real
This suffering, it seems so wrong
But hate is my next meal
The joy is shattered,
My mind destoyed
And all that mattered
Their lives have been deployed
From the begining,
All worldy and dead
Have all started pinning
For the new world ahead
Now you have seen,
Now you will know
What once could have been
Will never show
Inside I'm broken,
A replay of the same
My mind has spoken,
Its no longer a game
I take the blade,
So simple and short
On my skin is has made
An arrangment of sorts
The criss-cross lines
The blood that will seep
The mark that defines
And cuts while I weep
I feel so shattered,
Haunted in the same
And all that mattered,
Have their claim
Its time now,
I choose the easy path
I don't even know how,
Whats become of its wrath
I feel the peirce,
Distand and cold
A hate to feirce.
And far to old
My sight will fade,
Memories and all
And with what has made,
My own heart fall
Its a long run,
But in a blink of an eye
Its no longer fun,
Just like a sigh sigh (No likey this line
XP)
It all fade black,
I know its time
And just in the lack,
Of this one rhyme
My time is up,
I've walked to long
So take this cup,
And sing this song
"Adieu, Au revoir, I
bid you all good by,
My time has come to slip into the night
A dark abyss of endless peace
Is where I'll stay
Warm at peace.
Adieu, Au revoir, I bid you all good
by,"
6 faves · 2 comments · Nov 3, 2012 9:05pm
booImMewMew2
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1 decade ago
yeah, I ran out of my ideas, got lost, and restarted, but it always can back to that line, so I just kept it and said screw it all :3
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FrankConnor · 1 decade ago
that one line isn't that great indeed
you should try to think up an alternative, great poem for the rest ABAB rhyme.
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