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Torn

         *A One Direction Fanfic*

   Chapter 29

NIALLS POV
Last night Alex told everyone the story of her family. When she finished I could tell she was trying to keep the tough side of her out and she was holding everything in. The entire time she had been talking she watched Alyssa and after had Zayn take her into the other room. As soon as I noticed the tear going down my sisters face I could tell Alex was trying to stay strong. I pulled her into my room where she broke down in my arms crying and I picked her up and layed her in my lap. When she finally calmed down I asked her if she was okay and she said yeah and when I looked into her blue green eyes I could still see the tears forming. Before I could stop myself I kissed her. She went with it but I forced myself to pull away. 
"Um I'm sorry I shouldn't have done that" I couldn't look her in the eyes
"But when you smile at the ground it ain't hard to tell you don't know your beautiful" Her gorgeous voice sang and I looked up at her and smiled and she kissed my cheek. I laid back and put my arm around her where she fell asleep. I knew the feelings I had for her were wrong but I couldn't help it.  She was beautiful and something about having her in my arms was just so.. right. I wonder what Alyssa would do when she found out I was falling for her bestfriend.

ZAYNS POV
Last night after Alex told her story she sent me into Liams room to calm Alyssa down. I puleld her into my lap and sang Moments to her until she fell asleep. I never thought I would feel myself falling for someone younger than me. Alyssa is only 16. Niall was still not happy about it but he is starting to accept it. Alyssa was gorgeous and when Danielle started dressing her the way she did I couldn't help but go crazy. I want to take her out on a proper date but I'm not sure where. Wait. I have an idea.

LOUIS POV
While Alex had been telling her story I kept an eye on Alyssa. It was heartbreaking to see her the way she was. You could tell she was holding back tears. I just wanted to save her. I wanted to save her heart from anyone who would break it. I knew Zaynhad strong feelings for her but I couldn't help but wish it was me that she liked back. I had to suck it up and realize that she doesn't like me like that and she never will. 

HARRY'S POV
It was horrible to hear Alex's story and even worse to watch Alyssa. You could tell how upset she was. Alex was unreadable and Lyss was trying to be but you could see it in her eyes tthat she was dying inside. I know Zayn truely loves her already and can't wait to take her out . I can't help but think that I can love her more than that. I would never hurt her. When Zayn sits her down I die inside. It just doesn't feel right to see her with someone else.

 

Authors note-
Shortish chapter I know but I need ideas!
I kind of like writing from the guys POV. What do you guys think? 
I need ideas.. Anyone got any?
Are you guys Team Zayn, Louis,or  Harry?
I  might be starting a Instagram or Twitter for one direction quotes, pictures and such someone want to co own it with me?

 

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Torn *A One Direction Fanfic* Chapter 29 NIALLS POV Last night

23 faves · 6 comments · Sep 4, 2012 4:47pm

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itsjustme12 · 1 decade ago
Can I just say how much I am in love with this story? Pleaseeee if at ALL possible write more! Don't neglect your school work or anything, but I LOVE this story! I am addicted! You are an AMAZINGLY talented girl!

Team Zayn, by the way...<3
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juliaissmexy · 1 decade ago
hazza!!!!!!!!
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gymnast123500 · 1 decade ago
notify me??
team hazza!
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Jaymay · 1 decade ago
I LOVE THIS!!!<3333 TEAM HAZZA!!
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xoxojulieoxox · 1 decade ago
Team Louis!
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Bubblezzz · 1 decade ago
I has an idear. :33 Louis and Harry should show up at her place at different times and confess their love to her, then she will decide between Harry, Louis, and Zayn. Or...She will accept her brother's wishes and stay away from Harry and Zayn. I remembered you made Niall say they were players. ;3
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