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I stood there.
He stared at me.
I didn’t move.
He didn’t move.
The world around us was alive, but we were still.
And the longer I stood, the angrier I got.
Not just angry at Alora and Emmie for what just happened, but at this f*cking boy for being so rude and witnessing it!
And he was still staring.
With adrenaline pumping through my system, I bunched up my hands in tight fists and marched my high heels over to where the boy was sitting quietly on the fence of the parking lot.
He did not move.
But his eyes followed me.
I stopped just in front of him. “What the h*ll?! Why are you f*cking staring at me?!”
The boy was silent.
“Hellooooo?” I waved my arms dramatically in front of him like he was blind. “Don’t you have anything better to do than stare at me?”
Silence.
“Seriously? Are you seriously not going to answer me?” I crossed my arms and listened to the silence. “Wow, dude. Way to be a d*uche.”
He didn’t even flinch.
I looked to the ground and then back up at his face. There was something about it. He looked so compassionate, he seemed so sincere. Maybe that’s why I decided to actually confide in him.
“Well, since you have seen me being dropped by my friends and decided to remain silent about it, I’ll guess I’ll just explain what happened.” I could tell he was listening now. “I was telling my friends this big secret, like one of those deep dark secrets, and it was a really big secret. Like, life changing. Anyways, they pretty much told me to f*ck off and then they kicked me out of the car. Just like that. Dropped by my friends because of a secret that doesn’t really affect them at all.”
The boy stared.
I took that as a signal to keep going.
“And you know, it’s really hard, what I’m going through? No one understands.” I looked up at the boy’s unchanged face. “No one would believe me if I told them! They would say, nooo, he’s a nice man! But he’s not! He’s not!” And at that point, I broke down.
Every tear I have ever cried had a way of becoming the first drop of a rushing waterfall. Spilling from the top of my cheekbones and falling to the broken pavement with quiet, unremarkable splashes.
My words became unintelligible mutters as my thoughts became clouded over and scrambled.
We stayed like that for a while.
He sat perched on the top of the wooden fence next to the dumpster as I stood crumbling in front of him while my classmates chattered and laughed around us.
The day had begun without us.
The day had left us behind.
And no one seemed to notice.
And as I stared at the parking lot underneath my feet, I heard the soft thump of the boy’s sneakers landing next to my heels. Before I knew it, his sweatshirt-covered arms were around my shaking body.
One hand rested against my back and the other ran slowly over the back on my head.
I wiped my eyes clear of the blinding tears and peered up at his face.
“Who are you?” I whispered up at him.
His eyebrows bunched together and he tilted his head to the right in response.
I looked from one of his blue eyes to the other. “Why won’t you talk to me?”
He shook his head and closed his eyes shut.
My feelings where hurt. Why was I getting the silent treatment? “Just talk to me!”
His hands left my body and started to perform a dance. I stared, mesmerized. He looked back towards me expectantly.
“What?” I asked, confused by everything that was happening.
The boy sighed deeply and croaked out in a voice I could barely understand, “I’m deaf.”

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xxHelloLovelyxx · 1 decade ago
damn yo. 291 favorites.
you be the greatest writer on witty fo shizzle.
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mango824 · 1 decade ago
Omg i love that i am like obsessed with asl
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divafevame · 1 decade ago
favorite story. i look like every hour to see if its updated. notify me please?
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flossydossy · 1 decade ago
Amazing! ❤
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Dark_Fallen_x · 1 decade ago
Didnt see that coming :D that is sooo amazing! :) x
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UnicornHipster · 1 decade ago
OMFG I saw ur profile..My names Elizaeth too.. :o
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smallvictoria1 · 1 decade ago
OK. u just turned a boring, regular abusive story..
into something with a meaning.Ur the only author on here who doesn't just put ,romance, and abuse in the chapters.. Ur stories actually HAVE A PLOT. Great job, please never stop writing. <3
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asianninjanerdsrule · 1 decade ago
soooooo fu*king sorry, my fave button is broken and i could only fave this chapter once. btw, my week was basically spent going on witty and stalking your profile. and praying that you got back soon and posted the next chapter. also, i ate animal crackers and mango juice while i stalked you. just some questions:
1) is this boy in the same grade as she is?
2) can i give you a virtual hug for making me cry reading this chapter?
3) how old are the two of them?
4) is there any possible way you can fix the fave button on my computer?
5) why did your vacation suck?
ps. you are the goddess of writing on this website. i swear to god you could just be James Patterson or Rick Riordan or JK rowling or Nicholas sparks in disguise. literally, this should be published.
Holy cra.p, this was a really long comment. T_T
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Doctor · 1 decade ago
and i meant following
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Doctor · 1 decade ago
SUBSCRIBING THIS IS AMAZING I LOVE YOU. LOL NO
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ErinRAWR · 1 decade ago
OMG I KNEW IT OMG HES SO CUTE <3
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juliaissmexy · 1 decade ago
love it!!!!! great everytime notify me please
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babyphatpg · 1 decade ago
awww notify me please! glad ur back(:
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jane :-)* · 1 decade ago
@musicfanatic29 Some deaf people can speak. It'll probably come out as a distorted sound that they can't hear, but they can speak.
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msmalfoy13 · 1 decade ago
oh my god... so good
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xxcoolgirlxx · 1 decade ago
notify me please!!!
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musicfanatic29 · 1 decade ago
hey not trying to hate, just a tip but people that are deaf are also dumb..there's no possible way for a person to be deaf and be able to speak, just a statement, i'm really not hating i love your story tho so far!
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blair waldorf* · 1 decade ago
didn't see that coming! :P love this story! i'm sooooooo glad you're back(: reminder please!!
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brunettebabe26753 · 1 decade ago
Didn't see that comming haha (:
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iloveyouux16 · 1 decade ago
reminder please!
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