myahroxsdance5 · 1 decade ago
lOVE IT SOOO MUCH ♥ keep going!!
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Mangooo · 1 decade ago
So, how many time has the virgin almost lost her virginity now? I'm not following the story or anything, but everytime I see a chapter, she's always kicking a guy who seems to really want in her pants. Every guy wants in her pants, for that matter. But, yes, same as FrozenBr0gurt. Don't rush it. If i copied and pasted this into a word document, made it Times New Roman and font size 12, how long would each chapter be, pretty short and it is a bit lacking. :) Just some friendly tips and stuff, no need to take offesne.
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_pinkypromise · 1 decade ago
Is it possible for you to write two chapters in a day? :) I can't stop reading... Lol.
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FrozenBr0gurt · 1 decade ago
Your story is really REALLY good :3 however, from one writer to another, I would give you some advice as to put some sequencing into your story. You have an excellent plot and story line but it seems as if you are either rushing it and leaving out details or only putting the main parts of the story in. Add a bit more detailing and in my opinion it would be a big hit! But I'm only an English major pshhh what do i know XD <3
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NeverForgetYourBeauty · 1 decade ago
hurry up and post the next chapter.! could you notify me when you do? THANKS (:

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asianninjanerdsrule · 1 decade ago
see? i'm sure plenty of girls have wanted to sleep with someone without sleeping with them.
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montana249 · 1 decade ago
I love ur story!!!! Please notify me please?!!!?! Thanks :)
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Th3Br0k3nBl0nde · 1 decade ago
U love your story reminder please ???? Thanks !!!!
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marebearj · 1 decade ago
sooo good! notify me!!!
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ilovestars · 1 decade ago
ahhh amazing!! notify????
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Taytayhess123 · 1 decade ago
Notify for the next chapter please(:
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mustang4life · 1 decade ago
Notify me for the next chapter please!!:)
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SwagOnPoint · 1 decade ago
more? ;o notify me please?x
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AlwaysAwesomeNinjaUnicornz · 1 decade ago
awwwwwwwwwww the ending <333
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bethanybazinga · 1 decade ago
i agree with lovemexxx. but you seriously have a talent! keep up the good work(:
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juststaybeautiful · 1 decade ago
I LOVE THIS STORY!!! seriously this is the only reason I go on witty so much to see if theres another chapter :D
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Ambiemaddux · 1 decade ago
I just started reading them today, and I'm like "More, More, I need more!!!"
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LoveMexXx · 1 decade ago
more!
and i hate her dating Javin D: he tried to freakin her and then he apologizes and then she forgives him ? wtf. hes like all over her and has no respect for her.
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I* · 1 decade ago
MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
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