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Chapter 32

Hayden's Point of View
The sweet vanilla ice cream that rolled on the tip of my tongue was now starting to taste bitter.
Why wasn't Hunter looking at me when he asked that question?
He didn't find someone to replace me, did he?
"No, actually. I'm not." I truthfully said, my voice sounded cold and hoarse. "Are you?"
Hunter looked at me with shock, yet I could sense that he was pleased through the sparkly glint in his tropical blue eyes.
Oh, how I missed those bright blue orbs.
"I'm not, either." he said, trying to hide back his excitement.
My stomach began to feel jittery, as I poked the slush of melted ice cream in my cup.
"Hah, I guess that's-"
Before I got to finish, Hunter was already up, and pulling on my arm.
He dragged out of the ice cream parlor, lacing his fingers through mine.
I blushed, as our warm skin connected.
"Hunter, where are you taking me?" I panted, as Hunter began to run full speed.
It was hard for me to keep up, since he was an athelete.
He didn't reply to me, but I got my answer when my feet started to sink into pools of sand.
We kicked the cold sand behind us, as Hunter pulled us further down the beach.
Was he going to throw me-
Suddenly, I felt freezing cold water rising above my knees, soaking my dress completely.
"H-Hunter!" I said, jaw clencing up and down from my endless shivering.
He laughed, as he inched closer to me.
In the icy water, he wrapped his arms around my waist, taking me by surprise.
His warm body heat warmed me up, and soon, the cold water had no effect on me.
"Are you insane?" I asked, out faces nearly centimeters apart.
It kind of reminded me of the first time we kissed.
I was just as nervous as I was now, and our faces were so close, it was intimidating.
"God, I missed you so much." he whispered, brushing my dampened hair away from my face.
My back arched from his touch, as a small smirk appeared across his lips.
The moon lit up his features, making his skin look ivory pale, and his eyes look so intense.
I was speechless.
I wanted to tell him how much he meant to me, but words couldn't describe it.
"A year without kissing you... I can't take it any longer." he muttered.
I wanted him as much as he wanted me, even more.
I wanted to feel the sensation of his lips on mine, morphing in sync.
And that's exactly what I felt when he pressed his soft lips upon mine.
His lips were sweet from the ice cream we just devoured, but still minty from his freshly brushed teeth.
I leaned my body further into his, wrapping my arms around his neck, while he had his firmly on my waist.
I felt a tingling sensation on our lips.
I knew it wasn't sparks; it was so much more than that.
We pulled away, as I felt my lip quiver.
"You do realize that we're both going to be sick after this?" he chuckled, pressing his forehead against mine.
I laughed softly, closing my eyes, taking in the moment. "I know, but I really don't care."
"I love you, Hayden." he suddenly said.
My body went numb from excitement, as my heart pounded against my chest.
There was only one thing left for me to say.
"I love you too, Hunter."

The End.
I might be starting a new story sometime next week.
There won't be a sequel to this, just because I feel as if there's nothing more to write about.
Hope you liked it :) Thanks my lovely followers for reading! ♥

 

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Shortie* · 1 decade ago
Am I the only one that actually wanted to see how Maddi turned out? xD
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AlpacaPerson · 1 decade ago
Just went through and read the whole thing. Best story ever!!!!!
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NickiSmith · 1 decade ago
you should post all the stories you put on witty into your wattpad account because its really hard for me to go all the way to the back of your other pages to read your stories and I think you fans will enjoy I know I will
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shawnaleee13 · 1 decade ago
DONT SEE DONT SEE DONT SEE
DONT SEE DONT SEE DONT SEE
DONT SEE DONT SEE DONT SEE
DONT SEE DONT SEE DONT SEE
ONCE YOU'VE STARTED READINGTHIS YOU CAN'T GET OUT! rEAD ON IF YOU DON'T WANT TO DIE
... ... .........A year ago A girl named Kathy was hated by everyone. Everyone made fun of her. She was ignored. Even by messages. One day she decided to kill herself. Because even her parents ignored her. She jumed out her window. No one noticed utill people started dissapearing. Kathy haunted them. She made them suffer like the way she did. She hung them slowly and stabed them over and over very slowly so they could suffer like she did.
If you don't send this message to 15 diffrent comments you will die tonight by Kathy. Because she considers it ignooring her.
Example 1:
Dave looked at the first sentece and said, "Spam" And the next day the neighbors found him in his backyard, dead.
Example 2:
Joane was alone. She didn't have kids or a husband. She had alot of friends. When She had a sleepover with them she quickly had to check her e-mail.She saw this message and sent it to only 6 people because she thought
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AbercrombieSweetHeart · 1 decade ago
It was great(:
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highacres · 1 decade ago
FINALLY
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skittleslover24 · 1 decade ago
When are you gonna write a new story?
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samivolleyball2437 · 1 decade ago
this was a great story
:) i cant wait for the next one and btw im glad maddi didnt get what she wanted
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kmking2013 · 1 decade ago
THIS STORY WAS AMAZING AND I HAVE BEEN WAITING.... 19 DAYS FOR A NEW STORY!! You said you would start one sometime next week and it has been 2 and a half weeks. Im getting sad :( :( :((((((((((
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BriannaFaySongs · 1 decade ago
oh my friggen gosh, you should get published
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myheartsastero123 · 1 decade ago
If your going to writ a new story, notify me:) i lovee all your stories !! so please!
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taytayyx3 · 1 decade ago
That.was.amazing.<33
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NeumNeum97 · 1 decade ago
Great way to end it :D I love your stories!! Ur such a good writer!
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masher33 · 1 decade ago
uhh, an orb is a globe or something paranormal, so that doesn't really make sense..
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Sierraxoxo · 1 decade ago
Please make another story? your my inspiration<3
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carolcheer · 1 decade ago
make another story soon plzz!
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kateli325 · 1 decade ago
awh that was amazing&hearts;
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ItWillRain · 1 decade ago
NOO! It can't be the end!! This story is so amazing. <3 I wish it just kept on going..
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Meika23 · 1 decade ago
THE END?? NOOOO :(
it was a great story though
i wanted them to get marieddd
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sonias77 · 1 decade ago
Please start making books! I only read yours!
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