Witty Profiles
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Chapter 14
After morning classes that day, it was finally
lunch hours.
I was caught up into a crowd of students, who were rushing
towards their lockers to drop their stuff off.
I tried to weave my way by them, so I could get to the library
early.
I felt someone pushing my shoulder, as tripped over someone's
legs.
I felt myself shooting forwards.
I closed my eyes tightly, preparing myself for the impact of
falling.
But, instead, my face fell into someone's built chest.
My eyes opened, as I peered upwards.
A blush crepted upon my face, as Hunter smiled down smugly on
me.
My body was pressed agaisnt his, as he held my waist from
falling.
His warm fingers were burning against my skin, even though I was
wearing a shirt.
"I saved you." he stated the obvious.
I was so mesmerized by his blue eyes.
I narrowed my eyes away, knowing I had to avoid him at all
causes.
I squirmed out of his grip, as I brushed by him.
I took in a deep breath, as my stomach twisted in a ball of
guilt.
I knew I shouldn't be like this to Hunter, after all he had
done for me.
But, Maddi...
"Hayden, hold on!" Hunter called, pressing his hand on
my shoulder.
Her turned me around, as I stared right at him.
"Would you want to get something to eat after school?"
he asked me, hope glistening in his eyes.
The word 'yes' almost slipped out of my mouth.
It would've, if it weren't for a pair of evil eyes
staring at me behind Hunter's shoulder.
My eyes widened with fear, as my palms became sweaty.
I gulped, as Maddi gave me a warning look.
I closed my eyes briefly, as I stared back at Hunter.
"I-I can't." I stammered.
His mouth slightly pouted.
"What about tomorrow, yeah?" he asked.
I sighed, as Maddi smirked at me.
"I can't, either, Hunter." I said, almost sounding
hurt.
He frowned, using his thumb, rubbing circles on my temples.
"Is there something wrong, Hayden?" he asked
worriedly.
Yes, there is.
"No, Hunter." I paused, looking at Maddi, who was
glaring at me threateningly.
"Listen, Hunter." I sighed, pushing his hands away from
me. "I-I can't hang around you anymore."
My throat tightened up.
"Why not?" he asked, frowning.
"Be- because I don't like you." I said, voice
cracking.
Maddi, who stalked us from behind Hunter's shoulder, smiled
with satisfaction.
Hunter looked startled, staring at me with shock.
"Not even as friends." I lied. "I don't like
you, at all. You're just one dumb jock."
I could feel my eyes welling up with tears, as I broke free from
Hunter's grip.
I began to run down the hall, hiding in the corner.
Tears streamed down my face, as I pressed my head against the
wall.
I was being so selfish, hiding my own past and risking Hunter and
my friendship.
I'm so sorry, Hunter.
I'm so sorry, Cameron.
636 faves · 50 comments · Feb 5, 2012 8:44pm
maggimae1020
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1 decade ago
awww more pleasseee
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Amrie45
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1 decade ago
moreee
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samivolleyball2437
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1 decade ago
OKAY FORGET WHAT I SAID ABOUT MAKING MADDI GET REJECTED HARD .... I WANT HER TOO GET HURT! Hard :] x love the story btw and poor hunter :[
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PomegranateFool22
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1 decade ago
Wow!! you are talented, i love this story, so addictive!! hurry up and post more please!!!!
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kateli325
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1 decade ago
hateee madi.!! >:( love hunter :(♥
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MissCritic
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1 decade ago
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ThatsSoMeee
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1 decade ago
i love this ♥
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turgeonite2
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1 decade ago
oh my gosh :-( i feel SOSOSOSOSOSO bad for hunter.... like omg i would cry if someone said that to me...
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xo_laynieebaby_xo
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1 decade ago
ohmygooddnesss.
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lovergirl1111
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1 decade ago
OMG LOVE IT I almost criedd please make more soon you have so much talent and poor hunterr :( I hate maddi.... >:O
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LoveeLaughhLivee
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1 decade ago
MORREEE
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hprwhgluv
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1 decade ago
i hate maddi! poor hunter;( love thiiiss
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JustTheWayIAm
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1 decade ago
this almost made me cry...ahhh i love thissss
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IamBritishBoy
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1 decade ago
im in f*ing tears!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!
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loveloveloveyou143
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1 decade ago
looove itttttt
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xolivix16
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1 decade ago
ahhh this story is like my life hahah write more(:
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1234vampiregoddess1234
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1 decade ago
Omg hunter I feel so bad for him n I want to punch maddie in her face but keep writing quickly cuz it's so good
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x_emily_x
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1 decade ago
oh my god! please keep writing! i need more!
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hannah143
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1 decade ago
I HATE MADDI! Shes so full of herself. But that also helps make this story amazing! More please!!!!
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mikala_baby · 1 decade ago
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i love love lovvvveee this story!! please post more! and you should enter it online or something and see if they will let you publish it, your a great writer!