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Jesse's POV:
I texted Alex.
Me: I can see you.
She went to take out her phone when she walked into someone. I didn't see what happened next. Someone walked in front of me. I walked around them. When I looked back over Alex was gone. All i saw was a flash chestnut brown hair disappear into the cover of the woods. My heart skipped a beat. I walked slightly faster over to where she was just standing. I looked around. She was no where to be found. I sighed and looked at my feet. That's when I saw it. Her phone was laying half open in the middle of the sidewalk. I picked it up and looked at it. Entered in was 911. I stopped breathing. I shoved her phone in my pocket and ran to the spot where she had disappeared. I heard a very faint scream come from inside the woods. I lunged into the woods, running as fast as I could. I have to find her!! I thought over and over again. i half footprint here and there kept me on track along with faint screams that were slowly getting louder as I ran. After a minute of me running, the screams stopped. I paused, trying to listen. I couldn't hear anything besides my own heart, beating so fast i thought it was going burst through my chest. I looked down, trying to find another foot print. I stepped forward quietly, listening for anything that would help. I heard a cry, followed by a man yelling, then a deafening slap. I ran to the source of the commotion. I rounded one last tree and that's when I saw her.

Note: Sorry it's short, i need to Alex's POV. Comment?? Fave??

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UNDENIABLE 24 Jesse's POV: I texted Alex. Me: I can see you.

5 faves · 7 comments · Mar 1, 2011 5:54pm

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yankeepups12 · 1 decade ago
THanks!!! I love you all. You guys just made my day

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cantIlovewithouthurt · 1 decade ago
dude, you are amazing!
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summerlove7 · 1 decade ago
write moree(: i love this storyy
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sarahboo7 · 1 decade ago
Is jesse going to beat up the dude come on here keep righting this story getting really good. I hopw he dont keep the girl and she get to go to the police
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yankeepups12 · 1 decade ago
lol. It builds suspense. Follow and kepp reading. I'm writing the next chapter now ;)
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DJRoxsss · 1 decade ago
dudeeeeee dont stop shortttttt what happend did she drop kik the guy is she nailed 2 a tree
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yankeepups12 · 1 decade ago
Sorry, I rewrote this one thinking it had gotten deleted. I deleted the other one because i think this one is better.. Thanks<33
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