UNDENIABLE
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Jesse's
POV:
I texted Alex.
Me: I can see you.
She went to take out her phone when she walked into someone. I
didn't see what happened next. Someone walked in front of me.
I walked around them. When I looked back over Alex was gone. All
i saw was a flash chestnut brown hair disappear into the cover of
the woods. My heart skipped a beat. I walked slightly faster over
to where she was just standing. I looked around. She was no where
to be found. I sighed and looked at my feet. That's when I
saw it. Her phone was laying half open in the middle of the
sidewalk. I picked it up and looked at it. Entered in was
911. I stopped breathing. I shoved her phone in my
pocket and ran to the spot where she had disappeared. I heard a
very faint scream come from inside the woods. I lunged into the
woods, running as fast as I could. I have to find her!!
I thought over and over again. i half footprint here and there
kept me on track along with faint screams that were slowly
getting louder as I ran. After a minute of me running, the
screams stopped. I paused, trying to listen. I couldn't hear
anything besides my own heart, beating so fast i thought it was
going burst through my chest. I looked down, trying to find
another foot print. I stepped forward quietly, listening for
anything that would help. I heard a cry, followed by a man
yelling, then a deafening slap. I ran to the source of
the commotion. I rounded one last tree and that's when I saw
her.
Note: Sorry
it's short, i need to Alex's POV. Comment??
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5 faves · 7 comments · Mar 1, 2011 5:54pm
cantIlovewithouthurt
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1 decade ago
dude, you are amazing!
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summerlove7
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1 decade ago
write moree(: i love this storyy
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sarahboo7
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1 decade ago
Is jesse going to beat up the dude come on here keep righting this story getting really good. I hopw he dont keep the girl and she get to go to the police
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yankeepups12
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1 decade ago
lol. It builds suspense. Follow and kepp reading. I'm writing the next chapter now ;)
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DJRoxsss
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1 decade ago
dudeeeeee dont stop shortttttt what happend did she drop kik the guy is she nailed 2 a tree
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yankeepups12
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1 decade ago
Sorry, I rewrote this one thinking it had gotten deleted. I deleted the other one because i think this one is better.. Thanks<33
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yankeepups12 · 1 decade ago
THanks!!! I love you all. You guys just made my day
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