I Would Have Never Thought It'd Be You
Part Thirty-one
Jackies POV: I went to bed and saw lindz when she got home. "heyyy babbee" i said. "heyyy" she laughed. i knew i hadda tell her about how i wanted to be like her. "uhh...u know how all the guys like u..well i want tht to be me too..how do u do it?" i asked shyly. "oh ive been waiting for this!" she squealed. "okay lets go to my friends party tonighht hun!" she said. "and im picking out what u wear!" she said again. "okay" i smiled. she opened her closet and grabbed a push up bra, a really short black dress that had a v-neck and sparkles on the boobs, michael kors heels, another short dress and another pair of heels. The black dress and michael kors heels were for me and the other dress and other heels were for her. "here...put this on with this and these" she said handing me the stuff. i changed right there and looked in the mirror. I never realized how good i would look in this type of outfit. The bra made my boobs look amazing and the dress was just barly covering my butt and the heels were SO cute. lindz put on her stuff and than she offered to curl my hair. she also did my make up and i gotta admit i looked really good and so did she. "u look hott lindz" i smiled. "so do u!" she laughed. we grabbed our phones and walked downstairs. trevor and his friends were sitting on the couch and when they saw us there jaws dropped. "heyy trevv" i said breaking the akward silence. "oh uh hey" he smiled and winked slapping my butt. lindz was flirting over in the corner with one of trevors friends. "u look reallly hott tonight" trevor said putting his arms around my waist. "thanks" i smiled. he looked me up and down and moved his hands to my butt. we began kissing for a little and he felt me up but i didn't care. i was having a lotta fun. "eh hm! lets go jacckkk!" lindz laughed she pulled me away and we got in the car to go to the party.

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I Would Have Never Thought It'd Be You Part Thirty-one Jackies

11 faves · 12 comments · Jan 20, 2011 6:51pm

brunettebean · 1 decade ago
<3 all the stuff make it more intense
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JacobBlack9897 · 1 decade ago
I totally agree with skyler
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skylerrx · 1 decade ago
i dont liek how shes a comlete & goes from guy to guy. let her finish off being with trevor but then have a part where she realizes that she doesnt wanna be like that. i think it would be good if you made a month passs by then she meets this really cute guy that she falls head over heels for. but dnt make him "rubb her butt" or do anything sexual. make it a good, slow, relationship.
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anajayx32 · 1 decade ago
I think you should make a long chapter about Jake so that we can know what's going on with him.
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xosaxo · 1 decade ago
shes gunna be like a for a while and think her lifes perfect than a change is going to happen and jake will come in after the next few chapters.
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iloveme102298 · 1 decade ago
i agreee wit mylifenotyours itsss relli goodd, keep her like a slutt for a whileeee
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MirMir12 · 1 decade ago
i agree with jacobBlack
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JacobBlack9897 · 1 decade ago
what happend to jake serosly and shes a now.... and its just too fast....
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megsmile95 · 1 decade ago
I agree with Kenzielovessoccer13...
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kenzielovessoccer13 · 1 decade ago
she is like a now
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mylifenotyours · 1 decade ago
^^^^^
Agree with Kaitlyn! But you should keep her like that for awhile and like theres nothing wrong with her life, like it's perfect then suddenly something bad happens that makes her re-think everything..
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kaitlynnicolex24 · 1 decade ago
I think you should keep Her like this for a while. Something should happen that she should change her mind about beig like this.
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