The capture
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It was Halloween of '09, and I was 15. Well like most other teenage girls I wanted to have a sleepover and well, so I did. It was with my 3 closest friends. There was Anna but we call her angel because well she is one. Then there was Lizzy well Elizabeth but we call her Lizzy for short. She was the prep of us, but she wasn't a prep but she was if you know what i'm saying. Finally there was Angela shes the funny one that knows just what to say at the right time. Then theres me. I'm just the girl that goes with the flow and doesn't show that I care when I actually, secretly do. And my wonderous name is Jen. Back to the story though, because thats what you came her for. My mother worked at the Houston Memorial Hospital and she usually worked late shifts, such as that night. It was about four PM when she started and she was working until five o'clock AM the next day. It was excatly 8:09 PM when she called me and my friends saying that we could order pizza. We got a large chesse, a large pepperoni, a large extra chesse, and a large with sausage. We're not pigs but it was suppose to last us the whole night. I got up and went to the phone and I had the pizza place's number on speed dial (Because we order pizza so much.) Then out of nowhere the boys (our boyfriends) started pounding on the door. It was Jake, Josh, Derek, and finally Dylan. (Jake was with Lizzy, Josh was with Anna, Derek was with Angela, and Dylan was with me.) Derek was the only smart one but he was hot and I mean hot. Derek just ran in the door ran right up the steps and said to me as he was running up the steps "I'm locking all the windows up here!" Before I was able to have a say in it he was already up there doing just as he said. Josh decided to do the same thing but on the first floor. Finally I pulled Jake aside and asked him what was going on. He told me that there was a guy in a red pick up truck following them. I got really creeped out and said to start from the beginning. Right before he could start I ordered our pizza cause we were getting hungary. So I called and the pizza place said they should be here in about 20 minutes. I walked back over to Jake and told him to come and sit on the couch. He began his story. And he started by saying that him and the guys were at dunkin doughnuts when a guy (the driver of the red pickup truck) walked through the door and looked at Dylan and mouthed the words "i'm coming for you and the girls to." Dylan got really scared and told the guys to get the hell out of there. They ran out and started for my house. The driver of the truck ran out got in his truck and started following them. They lost him in an alley and headed here after 10 minutes of being chased. Dylan came over to me finally and put his arms around me because he could tell I was getting scared. It was about twenty minutes after he finished telling his story. He would of finished sooner but Anna kept interrupting to say something wierd or mean or something random about this situation like on how it wasn't true or something. Finally the doorbell rang and we all got a little scared but the pizza delivery guy goes pizza's here. I went to the door grabbed the pizza payed him said thanks closed the door and locked it. I ran over to Dylan so fast that he could of sworn I was on fire. I just realized that it was raining outside and that the guys were all wet. I went to the bathroom and got them towels. Derek was just about to say somethign but I go "Shh the phone's ringing." When I got the courage to answer the phone Angela ran over and clicked the speaker button. The voice said on the other end of the phone and I quote "Hey Jen don't worry but i'm just coming to kill you and your friends. Don't worry though it'll be painless." I yelled to the voice "What did we ever do to deserve this?!" The voice said your friends didn't do anything but you and your mother left me ten years ago. I realized that it was my father. I hung up the phone and fell to the ground and started to cry. There was a knock at the door. Lizzy screamed so loud she could of broke glass to tell you the truth I think she did. Thankfully it was my mothers voice at the door begging to let her in. I opened the door and there was my mother but she was held at knife point, by my father.