Pain : Part 2
This is for my english homework,
we have to write an emotional piece
please telll me if its any good, thanks xx
Two funerals in one week. Two black dresses. One little lace dress with a
matching lace hat. The other long, with a lace skirt.
The first funeral was her boyfriend and his mum, dad and younger brother
which she planned herself. When everyone leaves, depressed, she sits there,
her head in her hands, covered in mud.
She runs off, crying, rain smacking against her soft cheeks, mascara running
down her face.
Her mind going through the crash, how the road was icy and two cars going
too fast, with angry parents driving at full speed. How they both saw Harry and
me and turned together without paying attention to the road. How Harry ran in
front of both cars, screaming at them to stop.
She screams HARRYYYY!! As she trips over a branch and falls into a puddle
of mud. She just lies there, her beautiful dress is all filthy and ripped, in too
much pain to get back up.
Harry's best friend finds her lying there almost dead-looking, shaking her,
shouting her name, he carries her home, making her spaghetti and telling her
to not go to her family's funeral, she knows she can't.
For the past year she just lies there, on her bed cutting her arms, blasting
depressing music and living on pot noodles. Crying herself to sleep every
night.
Yeah so that was part 2. There may be parts 5/6. But please comment your opinion
thanks, xx
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MissJade09