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holdmeandneverletgo
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January 6, 2012 7:54pm UTC

Another Place, Another Time
Chapter 11 Part 1
I hadn't noticed that i had my eyes shut until I heard that voice. Arrogant and with an annoyingly attractive face. Patrick. What the heck am I suppose to do now?!
I looked around. I had a pretty good view since patrick was carrying me, AGAIN like a sack of potatoes.
Now every one was paying attention. Of course not when i was being kidnapped. Sigh, its always me.
The once cute guy was now on the ground curled up in pain. As if he knew I was watchikng him at that moment, he turned around and glared at me, mouthing 'I'll get you for that."
"Come o, lets go sweetheart. Its time.", that same player voice. He carried me out the door. He sat down on the ground the moment i felt the cold breeze on my face. "If you freeze, its your own fault." He began walking in the opposite direction in which we cam efrom. I didn't know where we were going but he saved my life and well, yea, he's my best option.
Into the nioght we went. The sun was just coming up when we finally went into this building. Not just any building, it was a huge mansion. Not to mention simply beautiful.
"Stop gawking and come in.", he reprimended me (am I using this word correctly?) as I stood there in the pouring rain. 'When did it start rainng?!" I hurried inside carful not to slip. But guess what, I did.
I landed flat on my back, Patrick, my mistake, the thing just stared at me. Then suddenly bursted out into luaghter. I glared evilly at my cruel captor.
"Patrick! Is this how you treat a lady? Help her this instant." I turned around to see a upperclass lady. Though she was wearing what I assumed was her pjs, I could tell from the way she held herself. She even yelled at that thing without making looking like a crazy woman.
I felt my face flushed with embarrassment. Apparently the thing didn't notice and stoood there like a little boy who just got scolded at. He sheepishly held out his hand to me. I smirkedd, thinking 'that's what you get.'
I stood up, but this time I slipped forward falling face first....
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Hope you enjoyed this nice long part. Might upload again tomorrow. I make no promises!

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December 24, 2011 9:56pm UTC

Catch Me if You Can
Chapter 20
The past two weeks have been better than ever.
Jason and I never went on a second date, since we both figured we weren't meant for each other.
Addison, Gerald and I have been getting along perfectly fine, I literally saw those two everyday.
And, Harry and I have been on neutral terms.
We saw each other every other day, usually at the beach.
I never stopped liking him, though.
I would never be able to fall out of love with his cheeky grin, eccentric blue eyes with green specks, and his humor that never failed to make my day.
But, it was now July 23rd, midway through summer.
Today was also the day I finally got to meet the infamous Lyssa, the girl Gerald always spoke about.
"Are you ready for the party?" Addison asked, as she applied a coat of mascara, staring intently at the bathroom mirror.
Addison had come over to my house earlier today, so we could both get ready for the little party that Gerald was going to throw for Lyssa.
The party was going to be small, just for all of Gerald's friends that Lyssa knew; I was an exception.
The party was going to be on a yacht, which was courtesy of Gerald's uncle.
I nodded, as I admired the way my new tan looked agaisnt my violet blue romper.
I fluffed out my loose curls, as I slipped on a pair of white sandal wedges.
Addison drove to the beach south of Los Angeles, where Gerald's uncle's yacht was.
From the parking lot, we could see that most of our friend's cars were already there, meaning we had to where late.
We hurriedly rushed up the stairs of the yacht, and onto the dock.
There was a transparent screen door, where we could see our little group of friends laughing and taking shots.
Harry's eyes met mine was Addison and I walked in the yacht.
I blushed when he gave me a small smile.
I noticed that he wasn't with Dani.
My eyes rotated around the room, searching for bleached hair, but it was no where to be seen.
Dani wasn't at the party.
"Oh, they're here!" we heard Gerald calling.
A tall, beautiful brunette stepped out, with her sparkling brown eyes glistening.
"Addison! It's been months!" she cheered, wrapping her arms around Addison.
She pulled away, and gave me a gentel grin.
"And I'm guessing you are Colby, huh?"
I chuckled nervously, as I nodded. I was shy when it came to meeting new people.
"It's nice to finally meet you." she sweetly smiled, giving me a quick squeeze.
Now that everyone who was invited showed up, we began to take off into the ocean.
Everyone rushed out to the deck, where we got a clear view of Los Angeles.
As everyone stripped into their swimwear and jumped in the pool that was on the deck, while others tanned on the sunchairs.
I went to the kitchen, searching for something to drink.
"What are you doing here?" a angelic voice asked.
I looked up from the fridge, and found Lyssa smiling down at me.
"I'm just looking for a drink." I explained, taking out two cans of Coke, one for her and one for me.
"Thanks." she nodded, popping open the can.
We lounged in the kitchen, as I found out that she was a year older than Gerald, and wanted to become a singer.
"So, tell me, what's this about you and Harry?" Lyssa asked out of the blue.
I choked on my soda, as my face flushed.
"Well..."

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December 21, 2011 8:00pm UTC

Catch Me if You Can
Chapter 18
A little under an hour later, Jason had showered, as I waited in his backyard, trying not to get splashed by the guys that were goofing around in the pool.
Jason finally came through the screen doors, with his hair fully blown dry.
He grinned cheekily at me, as he held out a hand for me.
I smiled back, as I took his hand.
"Where are you two going?" Gerald asked, rising up from the pool.
Harry's eyes shot towards where Jason's and mine's hands tied together.
He looked at Jason with envy, as his eyes flashed back to mine with saddness.
I stared away, shuffling my feet as I focused on the ground.
"I'm taking Colby out for dinner." Jason smiled, pulling me closer to him.
Addison frowned, as Harry abruptly stood up from his sunchair.
Dani sprang up with him, due to the fact that she was hanging on his arm.
"Really? Why don't Dani and I come with?" he gritted through his teeth.
A part of me wished that he would come, but a part of me also wished he wouldn't.
Without hesitation, Jason nodded. "Why not? That sounds like a double date to me."
I cursed under my breath, as Jason gave me a curious look.
Harry jogged up to us, with Dani lunging behind.
"Great, where are we eating?" Harry asked, as we climbed into Jason's car.
I crossed my arms stubbornly, as I stared out the window.
"I was thinking between Japanese or Italian." Jason responded.
Dani suddenly let out an annoying moan from the back.
"Ew. I hate raw fish, and pasta is so fattening!" she cried.
I rolled my eyes, shooting her a glare.
How could Harry deal with someone who was so whiny and irritating?
If I was with Harry, I would never be like that.
I clenched my fists in anger, wondering why I would even think of such a stupid thing.
"Maybe you shouldn't have come with us, then." I muttered under my breath.
I guess I didn't say that quietly enough, because I watched from the rearview mirror, as Dani sprang up from her seat.
"What did you just say?" Dani asked, flipping her bleached hair behind her shoulder.
"I said, maybe you shouldn't have come with us if you're going to be so picky." I groaned, calling out louder this time.
I could feel Jason glancing towards me, while stuggling to keep his eyes on the road.
Dani let out a screech, as she laid her head on Harry's shoulder.
Harry shifted uncomfortably, as Dani glared at me with her icy blue eyes.
"Harry! Are you going to let her talk to me like that?" Dani asked.
"Shush, babe. We're going to Japanese, okay, Jason?" Harry asked.
Jason nodded, as he made a turn.
The care was completely silent, except for the faint sound of music coming from the radio.
After a good five minutes, I watched as Dani peck Harry's lips.
I caught Harry making a disgusted face, as Dani's lips met his.
Dani pulled away, and smiled at me with evilness.
"Well, at least we aren't going to Italian. It's so fattening, I don't want to look like Colby in the future." Dani purred.
I was sure that she didn't mean for me to hear it, but I did.
I could tell Jason didn't hear her, because his eyes were so concentrated on the road.
Harry, on the other hand, stared at me with sympathy, as I threw my head back on the cushion.
"Don't say that, babe. She's gorgeous." I heard Harry mumbled after a minute.

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December 18, 2011 9:56pm UTC

Beautiful Summer #78
I heard the truck door open, slowly opening my heavy eye lids. I was exhausted. My vision was blurry for a couple seconds, but i heard Ryan cough," Cmon Hail, your home." He turned around and I got on his back for a piggy back ride, no way was I walking up to my room. I felt like I hadn't slept in days. Ryan walked slowly up the stairs to the house, careful not to make a lot of noise as he opened the front door. The last thing I saw before shutting my eyes again was Aj's truck in the driveway, uughh take me to Iraq with you I wanted to say to Ryan. I was just to tired.
He carefully layed me down in my bed, kissed my lips before turning towards the door.
"I'll be by tomorrow afternoon Hail, I love you." He whispered. I quickly opened my eyes feeling them swell with tears, "No no no, please stay with me tonight. Please? Please Ryan." I started to cry, I don't know what for though, but before I knew it Ryan was cuddling me in his arms singing me to sleep as he lay next to me, our feet touching.
Tonight he would sleep at my house. Tomorrow we would spend every last second together before he would go home and spend the night with his father, and as for the next morning?
I would get all dressed up, he would pick me up at 8:00 am. We would drive to the airport with his father, and both of us would say goodbye wishing he could stay just even one day longer.
And then he would fly thousands of miles away to Iraq.
I wouldn't hold him again for three months.

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December 16, 2011 6:53pm UTC

Catch Me if You Can
Chapter 13
"Colby, your friends are here!" my father called from the other side of my bedroom door.
It has been a week since I stepped foot outside of my house, and my father was getting worried.
Harry never texted me back after my last message, either.
"What friends?" I grumbled, closing my book, and settling it on my nightstand.
"Addison and Gerald, I think?" my father said.
"Tell them I'm sick." I muttered, snuggling close in my comforter.
I heard my father's footsteps fading away, as there were voices audible coming from the front of the house.
A minute later, my bedroom door opened.
"Dad, knock next time, please." I mumbled, closing my eyes to get some sleep.
"It's not your dad, silly." a soft voice spoke.
I dared myself to peek out of my covers.
Addison and Gerald were standing at the foot of my bed, both biting their lips in nervousness.
"What are you two doing here?" I asked, harsher than I had intended to.
I must've looked like a train wreck.
I hadn't brushed my hair in ages, and my pajamas were baggy and loose.
Gerald gulped. "We're here to apologize and take you out."
"Yeah, we're really sorry, Colby. We just didn't want to hurt you." Addison whispered. "Besides, your dad told us that you haven't been out of your bed for the entire week. You should come to the beach with us." she smiled gently.
Addison and Gerald looked genuinly sorry.
After all, they did mention that they were only trying to protect me.
I gave them both a small smile, that soon spread into a grin.
"Will you guys buy me a milkshake?" I asked.
Addison's eyes lit up, as Gerald's lip curved in to cheeky grin. "Deal!" they both smiled.
I threw off my covers, as I told them to wait in the living room as I changed.
I took a refreshing shower, running a comb through my thick hair.
I wore my favorite denim shorts, and beige off shoulder top.
I paced down the stairs, just to find my father telling Addison and Gerald a bad joke.
Their eyes all snapped to me as they heard me coming.
"Finally, Colby. It's good to see you out of your pajamas for once." my father teased.
I rolled my eyes playfully, as I pecked my father's cheek.
"I'm going to the beach with Addi and Gerald now. I'll come home before midnight." I promised.
We got into Addison's Mazda, and began heading off to the beach.
"Did you call Alex to come yet?" Gerald asked Addison.
Addison nodded, keeping her hazel eyes on the road.
"And Jason?" Gerald continued.
Addison nodded.
"And Raina?"
Addison nodded.
"And Kyle?"
Addison nodded.
"And Harry and Dani?" Gerald quickly said.
Addison glanced at me nervously, before looking at Gerald through the rear view mirror.
She nodded.

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December 11, 2011 4:23pm UTC

At One Point Or Another
[ it happens ] ----------> we all fall in love
With Our Best GuY Friend

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December 1, 2011 4:37pm UTC

THAT ONE FRIEND
That laughs at everything.
Even when its not funny.
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December 1, 2011 4:08pm UTC

i see sparks fly
w h e n e v e r y o u s m i l e ♥

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December 1, 2011 3:05pm UTC

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November 24, 2011 1:55pm UTC

The Last Kiss
Chapter One
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Our lips pressed against each other's. It wasn't a small, cutesy kiss. This was a hardcore kiss. He stroked my cheek, and then, shortly after we were under the sheets.
Now, I sat on the bed, in complete confusion and horror. I managed to throw my trembling legs over the bed.
"Babe, where are you going?" he said softly.
"I have to go."
"Stay," he said, his eyes pleading.
His look was too irresistable. I stayed in the bed with him.
"Why the hurry?" Logan asked.
You see, I have a boyfriend.. and my boyfriend isn't Logan. I cheated. I cheated on my wonderful boyfriend, Dan. And the funny thing is, we both knew it was wrong. Logan knows about my relationship, yet we still did it. My typical, party-girl self just resulted in trouble.
"Logan," I said softly.
"What?" He smiled. He leaned towards me and gave me a peck on the lips.
"I can't."
"What do you mean?" He said, his optimistic attiude had suddenly disappeared.
"Dan."
"Aubrey, c'mon, not now."
"You can't tell anyone!"
He opened his mouth but I interrupted him.
"You just can't!" My eyes started to tear.
He rubbed my cheek and said, "I promise I won't."
I then got up from the bed and got ready to leave. I threw on a pair of shorts and a clean tee shirt.
Just before closing the door, was Logan's voice.
"Aubrey?"
"Yeah?"
"I promise I won't tell. But I really hope you know that being with him is the wrong choice. We both know you have feelings for me."
I closed the door, my head spinning with thoughts.
What did I do?

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November 24, 2011 2:07pm UTC

Can’t Control Love
Chapter Three/Melody’s POV:
Junior year was coming to the end, summer was just around the corner. Friday after school I went over to Luke’s house. We were in his basement making out. His hand started to reach towards my boob. “No.” I shook my head while moving his hand away from me. I got up and dusted off my uniform skirt. I gathered my purse and keys. “Where are you going?” he asked. “I’m going to Chase’s gig.” I told him. It was nearly a year since Chase and I started to be friends. Now we were extremely close. “Melody, you can stay a little longer.” he said while putting his hands on my hips trying to pull be back towards the couch. “No, I can’t be late. I got a talent scout to come to this one.” I told him while smiling brightly. “Whatever, have fun. Just remember, I’m your boyfriend.” he said while letting go of me. “What’s that suppose to mean?” I asked raising an eyebrow. “You spend a lot of time with him. And I’m not saying you’re cheating on me or anything. All I’m saying is that you shouldn’t be spending more time with Chase than your own boyfriend.” he complained while walking away. “I’m sorry, it seems that way. I have to go, I’m sorry.” Lately Luke’s been a little jealous of me spending so much time with Chase. I can’t blame him though, I mean I did spend an awful lot of time with Chase. But Luke was my boyfriend and I loved him and I didn’t want to loose him.
I walked in in the middle of Chase's first song. He smiled at me when he saw me and I smiled back. I scanned the room for the scout that I told to come here and finally spotted him. “Mr. Brownfield?” he looked up at me. “Hi, I’m Melody. The one who told you about Chase.” I told him while pointing up at him. “Oh, hello there.” I sat next to him and we listened to the whole set. I tried to read his body motions to see if he liked Chase or not, but I couldn’t exactly tell. Chase didn’t know I had brought a scout to come watch him. Last time I got a scout to come listen to Chase and I told him about it he totally freaked out and was really nervous. It didn’t exactly end well. I nervously twiddled my thumbs as we listened to Chase’s last song. He clapped at the end of it. “So?” I asked the scout. “He’s defiantly very talented and has great potential and everything.” I nodded my head smiling, “But he’s not exactly what I’m looking for. I’m sorry.” he said. He shook my hand and then left. I took a deep breath and took a big sip out of the coffee I ordered. “Excuse me miss?” a middle aged lady asked me. “Yes?” I responded sounding confused. “That young man that just sang, you know him?” she asked raising an eyebrow. “Yeah, he’s my best friend.” I told her. “He’s very talented.” she said. “Thank you.” I responded taking another sip of my coffee. “Listen,” she started, “My name’s Trisha Burkwell. I come here sometimes to scout out young talent and I haven’t seen talent like your friend’s in quite a while. He has an amazing voice, I like his lyrics and his songs, and he has the perfect image that I’m looking for.” she pulled a rectangular piece of thick paper out of her Gucci bag. “Here’s my card, if he’s ever interested in a record deal give me a call. I expect big things from him.” she handed me the card then shook my hand before she left. I was so overjoyed I couldn't stop smiling. This could be Chase’s big break. I looked up the lady I had just talked too. Apparently Trisha Burkwell was very successful at making musicians famous, this wasn’t some joke.
“Hey, how’d I do?” Chase asked while walking up to me. “Amazing!” I told him smiling. I decided to tell him the news later, after all it was really big news and I couldn’t just spill at some coffee house. I drove him over to my house for dinner. The car ride was spent with laughter, I felt closer to Chase than I did with Clara and Steph. “Hi, Chase!” my mother exclaimed as Chase walked in the door. “Chase, how are you?” my dad asked. My parents loved Chase, I wasn’t quite sure why. They were always more excited to see him over than my boyfriend, Luke. We had a nice enjoyable dinner. “How’d Chase do tonight?” my mother asked peering over at me. “He was great, as usual.” I said while taking a bite of corn. He didn’t argue with me like he used too. But he was still way too modest for being so good.
After dinner, Chase and I went to go hang out in the game room. “You’re keeping something from me.” he said. “No, I’m not.” I said trying to lie. “Yes, you are. I know what you’re like when you’re not telling me something and you’re defiantly not telling me something.” I continued to deny it. I wasn’t sure if it was the right time or place to tell him. “Please Melody!” he begged. I kept shaking my head, “I told you, I’m not keeping anything from you.” All of a sudden he started to tickle me and I laughed uncontrollably. “Chase stop!” I managed to say in between giggles. “Not until you tell me.” I continued laughing. “Please stop!” I told him while laughing. He continued to tickle me, he knew it was the only way to get something out of me. “Fine, I’ll tell you!” I told him. He stopped. “Okay, you might want to sit down for this.” He looked at me weird and sat down. I sat down on the couch next to him. “Okay so today, when you were playing at the coffee shop I had a scout come and listen to you but he didn’t seem interested.” He started to frown, “Oh.” “I’m not done yet, listen. So after he left this lady came up to me and she was all did you know the person who just played and I’m like yeah. So then eventually she ends up saying she loved you and she gave me her card and she wants to give you a record deal!” I exclaimed smiling. “Are you serious?!” he said sounding super excited. “Why would I joke around about something like this?” I pulled the card out of my pocket and gave it to him, “Give her a call!” I tried convincing him. “I defiantly will, thank you, Melody. I wouldn’t be where I was now without you.” he took my hands, “You’re the talented one, Chase.” I started to blush, “If it wasn’t for you I would have given up by now, I mean it.” he told me. He was so excited, all his dreams were so close to coming true. We could barely contain our excitement; Chase had the shot to become famous.

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