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EpicStories

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Member Since: 15 May 2012 11:46am

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Location: Finland, Pori

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The Flames That Kill

Alexis has just lost her whole family, she is shipped off to live with complete strangers. Well the most richest people in the world. Join her as she learns what life is really about and as new friendships blossom, old ones will be found.
HEYYY PEOPLES!!!! 
lol, welcome to my story witty :) this is my first story, it's called The Flames That Kill. Please check it out and give your opinion :D

My other Witty is EveryHelloEndsInAGoodbye i usually put my quotes there :)

  1. EpicStories EpicStories
    posted a quote
    August 11, 2012 5:41am UTC
    ThThe Flames That Kill
    Ep 4
    Alexis POV
    It was more of an argument than a conversation .
    'mum I'm going out' I called out as I headed towards the door
    *flashback*
    'no you're not' my mum said as she walked into the hallway.
    'why not.' I whined as she gave me the 'do as I say' look. I turned away from her as her eyes softened and filled with sympathy. She ran her hands through her dark brown hair and sighed. I looked at her briefly but I couldn't bring my self to look into her eyes, so filled with sadness and despair.
    'He will come back when he's ready, lex.'
    she came closer to me and the closer she came the stronger the smell got, the sickening smell off alcohol and drugs. I flinched away from it, knowing any minute this gorgeous women would soon turn into a monster.
    'if he wanted to be found you would have found him already!' she said steadily as I turned to glare at her
    'do you even care? He's my brother! He wouldn't leave me'
    she snarled and her lips curved into an evil grin, I braced myself. The monster was here.
    She got right into my face and said 'look around alexis, he isn't here, ane isn't coming back anytime soon. You and trace should follow hislead, you're both as worthless as he is.'
    I felt a tear fall, she is horrible and I should give up in her, it's the drink talking my dad says, but it's the drink talking out of her mouth so it hurts ten times more. Me and trace always tell him 'drunk mind speaks the sober heart' he just tells us to stop being so ridiculous. But her eyes are so full with hatred it's hard to believe what my dad says.
    'he's your son, do you even care?' I asked my voice dripping with hatred. I promise myself here and now, that whatever this woman says to me, it will never hurt me, not anymore.
    'I gave up in you all a long time ago'
    'i hate you!' I screamed at her and ran out the door, I kept running but thI heard the screams, then the sirens.
    *end of flashback*
    I was dragged back to the present by Jenn "are you okay lexi?"
    'am I okay?' I asked my self. I didn't know what that meant anymore. "the last thing I said to my mum was that I hated her" I couldn't make I contact I don't think I can stand to see the shock and horror on their
    faces.
    "she knows you didn't mean it" luc said softly, putting her arm around m shoulder
    I looked at them both, tears brimming in my eyes, and without faltering I said "that's the thing." I paused and let a tear fall "I did"

  2. EpicStories EpicStories
    posted a quote
    August 8, 2012 8:40am UTC
    My sister just hung up in me. She's 8.

  3. EpicStories EpicStories
    posted a quote
    August 7, 2012 3:33pm UTC
    ThThe Flames That Kill
    Ep 3
    I follow Dave into the house and the first this i see is the staircase. It's like the ones you see in the movies, you know those really big ones made of marble? The whole house was open plan. It was gorgeus.
    "The girls will take you upstairs and show you your room" Dave said. I smiled and nodded at him
    "Thankyou" He kissed my forehead then the girls and left.
    Jenn sighs "Typical" she says then looks at me and smiles. "would you like to see your room?"
    I smile and nod, they both giggle and start up the stairs and I follow close behind.
    We stop at a white door that has my name painted on it in cursive letters. I smile and run my hands over it. Luc nudges me to go in, i smile and open the door. (this is her room http://www.bedroominteriordecorating.com/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/teenage-girl-bedroom-ideas-designs-decorating-photo-photos.jpg )
    "we kept it simple, not too much color and no clutter" i heard Jenn say, I smiled and hugged them both.
    "thankyou!" They laughed and hugged me back.
    I set Abi down in the crib.
    "We didnt know if you would want Abi in your room, or if she'd have her own. Dad said to do both." Lucy said.
    "it's fine" I smiled at them "i'd prefer her in here" they smiled relieved.
    "okay now down to buisness" Jenn Said with a really big smile. Lucy groaned. "what?" i asked confused.
    "You need new clothes!" I grimaced and Lucy laughed. "Finally someone thats feels the same as me" She said hugging me. Jenn just pouted.
    3 Days later
    I'm sitting at my familys grave, my parents and older brother are now laying with my baby brother Luke. Today was their funeral and i havent stopped crying. I felt so alone I had no family left. My mum was a foster kid and my Dad was an only child with no uncles or aunts. I had Abi and that was it.
    The Funeral was small, a few of Trace's friends came to offer their condolences and grieve. It was heartbreaking watrching Trace's girlfriend of 3 years say goodbye, The whole thing was heartbreaking. Jenn and Lucy never left my side though and I was glad for that. But now I needed to say goodbye properly. So Dave took Abi to the car and the girls stood a few feet back. I tried to remember the last conversation I had with my mum, it wasnt a converasation more like an argument.
    Cliffhanger!
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    CliffHanger!

  4. EpicStories EpicStories
    posted a quote
    May 21, 2012 2:51pm UTC
    Goodbye is the hardest thing to say, because you walk away with only memories; and memories, well.... they fade away
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  5. EpicStories EpicStories
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    May 21, 2012 2:47pm UTC
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    It's not the load that breaks you down
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  6. EpicStories EpicStories
    posted a quote
    May 21, 2012 2:45pm UTC
    IT'S BETTER TO LOSE A LOVER
    Than to love a Loser
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  7. EpicStories EpicStories
    posted a quote
    May 21, 2012 2:23pm UTC
    TheFlamesThatKill
    Episode 2
    I awoke screaming. I had the nightmare again, I was in the woods, the place I used to go with my grandpa. But I was alone, and scared. I kept screaming and no one came. I was lost. Always lost.
    I looked around my surroundings and saw a figure, he looked oddly familiar, but I couldn’t place it. He had a solemn look on his face, he was playing with his hands. He was sad. He looked so familiar, strong build, handsome face, in his thirties. Wedding ring on his finger. By the looks of it, he had it all I’m assuming some little kids running around at home waiting for their father to come bursting through the door. But why was he here then? and not with them? That’s when it clicked, he was the fireman, the one that saved Abi. “tell me” he looked at me tears brimming in his eyes “I need to know” I had to hear him say it, otherwise I wouldn’t believe it. He let a tear slide “we tried all we could, it was too late” I nodded, to lost to know what to do, I didn’t cry, I didn’t scream. I just sat there staring at the wall. “Jennifer?” hearing my name being called by another voice that wasn’t the firemans dragged me back to reality. He was a short man, with a good looking face and a toned body. He looked about 30ish. A business man no doubt. When I didn’t answer he carried on “my name is Dave Fisher, me and your father went to school together. In his-“ he breaks off and tries to regain himself “in his will he has asked that you and Abigail come to live with me”
    I look at him confused, I didn’t know this man, why would my father want me to live with him. He was a stranger. But if it was my fathers final wish I have to follow through. I nodded slightly and he gave me a sympathetic smile. “gather your things then Jennifer, I will get Abigail.” He walks over to Abigail and gently, without waking her, takes her out of the crib. I look back at the fireman standing awkwardly in the corner and I walk over to him. “thankyou, for trying. It means a lot” he smiles and hugs me “are you going to be okay?” I nod “I’ll get there”
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    sorry its not very good, i'm tired :)
    i hope you like it :)
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    also go check out my friend TheOtherDirection s story, i helped out with the idea of it, and she's brilliant at writing :)
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  8. EpicStories EpicStories
    posted a quote
    May 15, 2012 11:53am UTC
    TheFlamesThatKill
    Ep 1
    The flames were bright, burning. They were all I could see, I heard the strangled screams of my brother as he burned to death. It was all my fault ,I caused this. The flames continued to consume the house as a neighbor held me back from running in. I had to save them, my mum, my dad, my brother. My baby sister. They couldn’t die, not because of me. The screams stopped. All I could hear were the sirens, they were deafening. All of a sudden I was pulled into an ambulance, a blanket was wrapped around me and a middle aged woman was saying something. I couldn’t hear, I couldn’t tear my eyes away from what was once my home. I heard crying. My head shot towards where it was coming from, a firefighter was holding a small bundle. Abigail! I got up and ran, all the way to him and took my baby sister out of his arms. He looked at me sympathetically. “my family?” I managed to croak. His eyes saddened “we are trying, we will do all we can” I broke down there and then. The paramedic took me and Abigail back to the ambulance and we went to the hospital, they told me if there was any news I would be first to know.
    Shall i continue?
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