Red String of Fate
Chapter 1
Jimmy quietly followed a suspicious man in black whose presence
sent chills down his spine. Hiding behind a corner, he watched as
a stocky man in a business suit and an equally stocky man in black exchanged
millions of dollar bills. Jimmy narrowed his eyes and silently took out his camera to
capture the illegal scene, but felt someone behind him.
He quickly whisked around and saw an eerie eye stare back at him scarily
before he was hit on the back of his head and fell down with a yell.
The man in the business suit panicked and ran away.
"B-bro?" The surprised man in black asked his accomplice who came out of the shadows.
His tall partner was dressed in black and had long silver hair.
His eyes were that of a merciless assassin.
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Rachel started to dial Jimmy's number again for the 10th time
when she was startled by her father's outburst. Richard yelled,
"RACHEL! Go to SLEEP!" Rachel got ticked off and said curtly,
"Fine, but you BETTER clean up or in the morning, I will show you what
I learned in karate." Richard muttered, "Okay, but go to bed already, geez."
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"Vodka, I thought you made sure nobody followed you," the man in black said coldly.
"But, bro-" His partner interrupted him by taking out a small tin box and opening it.
"No worries, let's just kill this fellow. And call me by the codename, will you?"
Vodka gulped and said, "Yes, Gin. But how will we kill him? If we use a gun,
the police will hear it. They're still around because of that roller-coaster murder case."
Gin smiled evilly and said, "The Organization has developed a new drug.
A poison, actually. Once the poison enters the body and kills it, no trace
of the poison in the blood will be found. A marvelous thing, isn't it?"
Vodka said, "Y-yeah.." as Gin lifted up Jimmy's face. "Oh, isn't this that Jimmy Kudo,
the high school detective? He solved the murder case a few hours ago.
Well, good bye, Jimmy Kudo," Gin said with a malicious grin,
"Perhaps I'll apologize to you in the next world."
As Gin forced Jimmy to take the pill, Vodka laughed and said, "Doubt it!"
"Let's go," Gin said as he stood up and dusted his hands. The two disappeared in the shadows.
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Jimmy, still a little conscious, thought to himself, "Th-those
men... What did they do to me?!" The temperature of Jimmy's body flared up
and his heart jolted and jumped. Jimmy squeezed his eyes shut and
felt the pain. He thought, "I'm dead.." and closed his eyes.
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so... chapter 2! please tell me what you think c:
based upon Detective Conan, a show/series which i don't own!
i just loved it and wanted to reword the story and add in my own stuff, too.
CuddlePanda