loveisfearlessxO · 1 decade ago
@Breeze, yes I read it over and I totally get what you're saying(: Thank you I'll try to fix that :)
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Breeze · 1 decade ago
CONSTRUCTIVE criticism: You know how to write a plot and your spelling and grammar are awesome but you lack some descriptions... Like, the whole thing is just action? (He did this, she did that. We went here, I did this...) You get what I mean?
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imjustsomegirl · 1 decade ago
Notify please
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loveisfearlessxO · 1 decade ago
Thank you every one :) The second chapter will be up tonight! ♥
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Mrs_Horanxxx · 1 decade ago
Wow next chapter please
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Legittlyinsane · 1 decade ago
omgomgomg keep going and keep me updated, I love it.
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sheyannadawn72* · 1 decade ago
i love this so so much .
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Cecerokz3737 · 1 decade ago
I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS. OMGGGGGGGG I LOVE THIS A LOT
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