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Eyes Wide Shut

Why is it that the human race

Does value those of fairest face?
Do they value not what lies below?
What doesn’t on the surface show?
I sit here and I ponder this

Is beauty all that merits bliss?
For those whose beauty’s past skin deep
Is there naught but to cry and to weep?
How often he whose skin is fairest
Is also he whose soul is barest?
Is it such a mortal sin
To hold one’s beauty ‘neath the skin?
For we whose strength is not first sight
Claim happiness is too our right
If they refuse to see the light
Can they escape an endless night?
But a prison has long been devised
By those who see with just their eyes
Their ties to humanity will soon be cut
If they live with their eyes wide shut.
 
*(This is NOT my poem. My friend’s brother wrote it a couple years ago, and I love it.)

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Eyes Wide Shut Why is it that the human race Does value those

3 faves · 2 comments · Feb 3, 2012 8:56pm

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gigglebox4214 · 1 decade ago
Thank you. As I said, I can't take credit for it (but wish I could!) It's true what you said, though. I'm afraid I'm a rather judgmental person that has a hard time seeing past people's looks if they're "too pretty." I need to get over it, but struggle with it as I'm rather insecure about my own looks as well (though my mother swears I'm beautiful. But then again, she's my mom!) And I've never had a boyfriend in my life either, so it looks like we have something in common. :)
Thank you for the input!
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yourmom7911 · 1 decade ago
Has it occurred to you that a lot of good-looking people actually have good hearts also? I hate how everyone on this website is so blatantly stereotypical towards them. And no, I'm not an offended good looking person saying this. I'm an ugly sophomore guy who hasn't had a girlfriend in his life. I'm just frustrated by the pages and pages of the same thing. However, I must say, not looking at it from that angle, this is a pretty well written poem.
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