emilxo · 1 decade ago
I agree with lovehopepeace19. You're off to a good start though! Keep it up! ( :
Would you mind checking out my story?
It would mean a lot! Thank youu ( :
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AmbyBamby · 1 decade ago
Continue!!!
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lovehopepeace19 · 1 decade ago
I think it could be good if you maybe added a little bit more detail and kind of slowed things down a little bit. :DD
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