xBunnygirlx
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1 decade ago
Hey I loved both of your chapters (: A little advice though...I'm a writer myself (: So I think it would be better if you go at a slower pace its going to fast (: Take your time to add detail so we(the readers) could get to know the main character and connect with her (: Overall I love it ! Great Job! :D 0reply
xBunnygirlx · 1 decade ago
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Hey I loved both of your chapters (: A little advice though...I'm a writer myself (: So I think it would be better if you go at a slower pace its going to fast (: Take your time to add detail so we(the readers) could get to know the main character and connect with her (: Overall I love it ! Great Job! :D