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Chance                                                             
A little girl watches with big blue eyes             
As her mother walks with her, right by her side.
Twirled golden hair like her mother’s red curls  
Bounce through the meadow as a rooster crows. 
A breeze washes through the warm morning air
Blowing their dresses and brushing their hair. 
Wild flowers bloom in the long green grass      
That tickles the two paired ankles as they pass.
Laughing and dancing as the day carries on   
No music is playing only the sounds of their hearts.
They start to go home as night quickly falls    
The moon and the stars now brightly show.      
Soon they are home back at the ranch                
A little girl and her mother are together by chance. 




I need some opinions on this i wrote it about me and my mom and I wana see what you think i wana try and get it published or something. Any adivice would be good too. Thanks.
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Chance A little girl watches with big blue eyes As her mother

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mytruelove9 · 1 decade ago
thanks means alot to hear that :)
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imaginexox3 · 1 decade ago
This is really amazing(:
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chzz12 · 1 decade ago
That is good you should like get it published by hallmark
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