xxdangerousxx · 1 decade ago
i promise i will continue && thanks for correcting me, i spell alottt* of words wrong! Thanks everyone! :)
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oxsmilelovelaughxo · 1 decade ago
Really good, but it's drawer, not draw...(: Sorry I am like the grammar police(;
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luv4bball7868 · 1 decade ago
CONTINUE!!
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00cookiemonster00 · 1 decade ago
keep going i rly want 2 know what happens
u r an awesome writer
comment on my profile when u post another pllez
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JustRachhhx3 · 1 decade ago
omg thats really good! you should keep going ;) let me know by commenting on my profile if you post another one!
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Wittyreviewsx3 · 1 decade ago
KEEP WRITING
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storyofmylifeXoXo · 1 decade ago
very good, but its cologne, not colon..ahahahah keep going and please read mine?
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