This is just alittle excerpt from
a story im writing, "Right Kind Of Wrong"...this part
really hit home i guess, so i wanted to share it with all you
gues...Lemmie now what you think, what i could change or add
in?
>Tears began to fall from her eyes and
she didn’t try to stop them. Her body started to tremble and
she slid down the door, wrapping her arms around her knees for
comfort. With every shiver she could feel the mental wall in her
head shatter more, and with ever tear she could feel her own sanity
slip away. The sound of her labored gasping filled her ears and she
covered them, trying to shut out any and all
thoughts.<
This is just alittle excerpt from a story im writing, "Right
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Mar 4, 2014 12:34am
PainOfAPoet* · 1 decade ago
know not now* -_-
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