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Hey guys...

I wanted to give you a preview of a song i've been writing to put in my fanfiction, Battle Scars, on my story account, DeStory. It would be Ruby and Alaska's first single - and it's based on Alaska's troubled love for Zayn. 
Here's the chorus.

I don't want to date a two-timer
I don't want to date a liar
I don't want to give my heart to someone who'll purpousely break it
And I don't trust you

So, whadda you think? Feedback PLEASE!
 
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Hey guys... I wanted to give you a preview of a song i've

2 faves · 6 comments · Mar 10, 2013 6:37pm

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fanfiction · song · battlescars · sing · lyrics

HelloSmileyFace · 1 decade ago
get it to rhyme on the third line and its good :)
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Johanna Mason* · 1 decade ago
Thankies! I did think i should try rhyming it... but i don't know how to rhyme it.
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HelloSmileyFace · 1 decade ago
Try. " I dont wanna give my heart to someone who will tire" or something like that iddkkk just a suggestion
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Johanna Mason* · 1 decade ago
OMG that's wayyy better. :D I'll go change it right now! Thank you so much!
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HelloSmileyFace · 1 decade ago
no problem :) and i stink with rhyming so that was awesome :D XD
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CantLiveWithOut1D · 1 decade ago
Doesn't rhyme :l
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