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the new girl
chapter two (part three)
ryan's POV

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“You look pretty.” I told her, she did she was wearing a pink sweater and black leggings a black scarf and boots, she looked pretty but laid back. I am glad a changed my clothes.

      “Thanks you too. I mean you don’t look pretty you look—“

      “I know what you meant.” I could tell she was nervous so I just giggled. She gestured me to come in. She introduced me to her mom and off we went.

      We walked outside and I slowly grabbed her hand. As I did she grabbed mine. We were holding hands! I knew this was going to turn out great. I looked over at her and she was shivering.

      “Kenzie, you look freezing!” I exclaimed, and before she could reply I took my jacket off and wrapped it around her shoulders. I rapped my arm around her and pulled her close. My heart was racing I could smell her perfume it was vanilla. This was amazing. I knew I could to make it even better. So once we were about half way there I looked up at the sky the stars were already out. They looked amazing. Then I stopped walking. Mackenzie looked at me confused.

      “Look at that I said pointing up at the stars.” She gazed up I could see her eyes they twinkled with the stars. “They are almost as beautiful as you.” She then moved her gaze from the star to me. She looked me in the eyes her cheeks were red and so was her nose it was cold out here. I then looked at her. My heart started to pound so loud I thought she could hear it. But she didn’t react. Then, slowly, I leaned in…


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if i put it all together it was too long so i have to make it in parts
let me know what you think and if i should still go on
love you
and thanks for reading
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TheWeirdKid · 1 decade ago
you're a really good writer :)
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CheerBows_and_Spandex · 1 decade ago
thanks sweetie :)
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ElleRain10 · 1 decade ago
So far so great!
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CheerBows_and_Spandex · 1 decade ago
thanks :)
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ilovemustaches830 · 1 decade ago
i wish i could fave this like 20 times
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CheerBows_and_Spandex · 1 decade ago
haha thanks :)
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