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the new girl
chapter two (part one)
ryan's POV

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          This whole crazy stuff started when I really started falling for Mackenzie. That was before all of our lives were completely changed. It was in eighth grade:

          Today was going to be the day. I was finnaly going to ask Mackenzie out. She is the most beautiful girl ever.  She may not see it but she is perfect. She has long brown hair. That seems to fall perfect no matter what you do to it. She has golden brown eyes, that could out shine the stars. I have known her sense second grade. But I really started to like her in sixth grade. I know what your thinking we were young but sense sixth grade I knew she was the girl I was going to marry.

          I walked into algebra, second period, and I saw her. This was my chance. I finnaly built up all my courage to do it. I had to do it now or else I knew I never would.

   “Hey Mackenzie.” I finnaly chocked up. I felt like I was going to throw up but I knew I had to stay strong. The most beautiful girl was standing in front of me. And she was talking to me.

       “H-hi ryan.” She said with a smile. She seemed nervouse. Why was she nervouse? I am the one taking all my courage to just even talk to her. She looked beautiful, even in her sweat pants and a sweat shirt. She had no makeup on. And to me that was when she was the most beautiful. Ok here it goes.

       “You look beautiful today,” I said with a smile. She blushed and I couldn’t help but blush too.

      “Mackenzie, I know this may sound weird but I really, really like you. I know a beautiful girl like you would never go for a guy like me but maybe we could see a movie this tonight?” Finally I had asked the girl of my dreams out.

      “I would love too.” Yes, she said yes! This was turning out to be the best day of my life.

      “Ok ill pick you up at seven.” I gave her a wink and one last smile and walked away.

       After school I walked home with my friend best friend Kaila I have known her sense Pre-school and was basically my sister. “I finally did it Kaila.”

        “You did! Good for you Ryan! When and where are you guys going?” She immediately knew what I was talking about. I hadn’t shut up about it for a month now.

       “Tonight we are going to the movies.” We walked and talked about what I should wear and what movie I should take her to see. We stopped at McDonalds to get a burger and some ice cream. We did this every Friday. We left McDonalds and started towards our houses. Once I dropped her off at her house, she lived about two blocks away from me, I walked home. I was just about to walk into my house when I looked next door, to the house that separated me and Mackenzie’s houses; it had a “for sale” sign in the yard.

    


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if i put it all together it was too long so i have to make it in parts
let me know what you think and if i should still go on
love you
and thanks for reading
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