Invisable
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The summer
at Maple Church has started. The poor girl whom
spends her school
days with her best friend, or alone, and being
bullied is relieved that there's a break
from the torture. Her best friend is her brother,
merely a year older than her, and
he's the one that knows her deepest secrets,
he's the one who helped her through
heartbreak, the only one she can trust.
One night, she and her brother go off to the park.
The park with a giant waterfall.
It's strictly forbidden, but they go there
anyway. They were sitting on the rocks at
the top of the waterfall, talking, venting, when
suddenly a hooded person pushes the girls
brother down, to the deep pool of water, having him
underneath the waterfall.
He screams, she screams, the hooded person runs away.
She runs down to her beloved
brother, but she already hears the splash and
struggle.
She knew it was too late.
The poor girl collapses to her knees, and weeps. Her
brother, her best friend, the only one
she could trust was dead. He had drowned, because
gravity was too strong. He was
murdered.
And now the girl is determined to find and kill
whoever did this to him.
There is a murderer on the loose, and nothing is safe
in this town anymore.
Tell me what you think
(:
anigal231 · 1 decade ago
i like it
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