LoveAlwaysMe · 1 decade ago
hey, I like your story:) I can't wait ot see where you go with it! Just keep in mind to double check spelling and grammer it kind of makes it hard to read at times. But other then that keep up the great work! :) <3
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1Dprincess143 · 1 decade ago
i love itt! adrians my have characterr so farr! (:
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Zane74 · 1 decade ago
its good :) put a little more detail in your stories & it could be amazing :)
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