Living Death.
part 09
// FabStories
My jaw dropped and my knees
uncontrollably trembled. I felt like collapsing to the floor, but
a voice in the back of my head was shouting, think,
Clarisse!
"Let's go!" Arielle yelled,
Derek by her side. They were by the front door, ready to shove
the door open. I realized they were talking and waiting for me to
join them.
I shook off my thoughts and jogged towards
them. Derek grabbed my hand and squeezed it, my heart
automatically starting to beat faster. We hopped in the car, and
this time I took the backseat. My mind wandered back to the
conversation between Drew and his father, thinking back to when
his father claimed he was going to kill me. I was horrified by
that idea; I admit I never knew much about him, but I didn't
know that he would have the guts to kill me. For money.
"So," Derek began, "Let's
go over what we know. You're both here because Arielle wished
for one last chance of confessing her love for Drew, who is
Clarisse's ex-best friend. We know Clarisse's father
murdered Arielle, and we're absolutely positive Drew's
father is responsible for Clarisse. They were both working
together, and apparently Drew's father was going to be paid
for killing Clarisse. Am I right?"
The whole discussion made my stomach curl up
in knots. "You're right," I mumble.
Arielle nods in agreement and we drive in
silence. Derek impatiently drums his fingers against the steering
wheel, and Arielle is busy thinking about things herself. I just
shut up and clamp my lips tight to keep me from sputtering out
curses directed at Drew's father.
"So, how were you killed?" I blurt
out.
Derek perks up. "Me? I was shot two
minutes before midnight."
"Really?" I remembered I had
noticed the time when I was shot. I was killed at 11:58PM as
well. "Me too. Do you know who shot you?"
He shakes his head glumly.
"No."
We arrive at the hotel, and almost
immediately we spring into action. It was 10:37PM, so we had
quite a bit of time before my death. We spot Drew's father
heading inside the hotel, so we follow him.
"Keep an eye on him," Arielle
says.
Derek and I nod and watch Drew's father
flash a fake invitation to my party at the receptionist. She
stupidly nods and shows him to the room. Arielle stays outside to
watch for anyone else suspicous, so it's only me and Derek.
He loops his arm through mine and we trudge towards Drew's
father. The receptionist leaves when we're in the ballroom,
and Drew's father trails over into a dark corner, completely
concealed from others to see. He takes out his gun and clutches
it tightly to his chest, glancing nevously around the room, which
is starting fill up with more guests.
I feel a tap on my shoulder, finding it to be
Arielle. She blinks her blue eyes at me and says, "No
one's coming. We're safe."
"For now," I whisper. We were
probably going to be killed again, but we were going to do our
best to avoid it.
"Why don't we kill Drew's father
like we did with yours?" Derek suggests.
I shrug, but I follow behing them as we
approach Drew's father. I stare into his narrowed pale green
eyes, and I know we're going to have to hurry if we're to
kill him first. I notice the time, 11:32PM. It's still a bit
too early before I'm going to die, but then we can kill him
easier this way.
"Let's do it now," I hiss.
"We can't. We have to wait until
it's the time of your death. Otherwise he won't die.
That's why when we killed your father he could interact with
us. He was able to see us, since you were his target. It's
just the way things work," Derek replies.
I groan and tap my foot on the tiled floor. Seconds
seem to past as hours, and sweat is starting to pour down the
back of my neck and palms. Every time I look at Drew's
father, a small lump begins to form at the back of my throat,
growing bigger each time. Finally, at 11:57, I break out saying,
"I can't do this!"
The clock ticked to 11:58, and Drew's father
noticed me. He locked his eyes with mine and raced towards me,
gun in hand. He was about to pull the trigger when Derek stole a
knife from a dinner table and slammed it into Drew's
father's back. Blood spurted out, and he dropped the gun to
the floor. He collided onto the ground, his breathing heavy and
fast. He managed to give me a death glare and whisper,
"You'll never get out." Then smirked,
satisifed, and closed his eyes.
"He's gone," Arielle
murmured.
"But we're still
here."
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Liking it so far? I'm not sure I liked this chapter too much,
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BTW;
I know what's going to happen at the end, but I wanted to ask
of something from you guys. I can't decide between how I
should end it, since I have two ideas! I can either give you the
happy ending, or the sad ending. Or, BOTH. The happy ending will
be the epilogue, and the sad one will be the alternate
ending!
What would you like?
8 faves · 1 comments · Jul 26, 2012 3:47pm
LoveNeverEverEverDies · 1 decade ago
U could write both? But if the happy ending means going back to life then YES I want the happy ending!!
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