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the Murder's Son
Chapter Nineteen:
Evelyn's POV:

I wake up in a dark room with my arms and legs tied to a chair with duct tape over my mouth.
"Well, good morning princess." a tall, muscular man says as he opens the door.
I am temporarily blinded by the light.
"Are you ready to play a game?" he asks, almost excited.
I look at him with a look of shock and confusion on my face.
"You're an a**sshole." I mumble through the duct tape.
He looks at me confused, then rips off the duct tape. I scream in pain while he smirks at me.
"You said what now?" he asks.
"I said," I say clearing my throat. "You're an a**hole!"
He looks at me p*ssed, then he slaps me in the face. I scream again. I can feel the red handprint forming on my face that will likely leave a bruise.
"Thats right princess. I'm big, you're little. I'm important and you're not. No one will even notice or care that you are gone." he says smirking again, pushing my chair backwords.
My head is the first thing that hits the hard, cement floor. I feel something sticky and wet run down my hair line and down the back of my neck.
"Now." he says untying my hands and feet. "It's time to play a game."
He pulls/drags me over to the nearest wall and chains one of my arms to it.
"What kind of a game?" I croak out.
He smiles a devious smile and goes out of the room.
He comes back a minute later, with what looks like a paddle wheel.
"A very fun game. You will spin this wheel once every 12 hours and which ever one it lands on, will happen to you." he says smirking.
"And if I decide not to play?" I ask.
"Then I will chose for you."
I gulp.
"And what happens when they run out?"
A devious smile appears back on his lips.
"Then, I'll kill you. Now, spin."
I hesitantly lift up my hand to spin the torture wheel. I read them as they go round and round.
Teeth and claws.
Weldor.
Tools.
I stop reading them when I start to get woozy.
It finally stops.
Fists and Feet.
"Oh, I'm going to enjoy this." he says cracking his knuckles.
My eyes go wide in shock and I shrink back to the wall.
He smiles and walks toward me. He kicks me in the stomach and I scream out in pain. He picks me up off the ground by my shoulders.
Oh God.
Oh God.
Please just let this end.

He throws me on the ground and punches me in the face.
And thats the last thing I remember.

Hi lovlies.
Im sorry it took so long.
I have like NO motivation to upload anymore let alone write.
I feel like no one likes it.
I think this might be my last story on witty...
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the Murder's Son Chapter Nineteen: Evelyn's POV: I wake

19 faves · 8 comments · Jul 7, 2012 12:16am

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justinluv11 · 1 decade ago
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Keep_Your_Head_High_the_Sun_Will_Shine · 1 decade ago
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cloudnine_21 · 1 decade ago
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