JimmyIsWeird
·
1 decade ago
Great start. I have an account for stories too. One tip: if a conversation starts and a chqracter starts getting really happy or sad, dont jump straight to the part where she/he starts sobbing. Give it a little more time for them to get more and more upset or happy. Maybe even put in a little more dialogue and thoughts from the characters mind. Anyway, keep it up :) 0reply
JimmyIsWeird · 1 decade ago
0
reply
Great start. I have an account for stories too. One tip: if a conversation starts and a chqracter starts getting really happy or sad, dont jump straight to the part where she/he starts sobbing. Give it a little more time for them to get more and more upset or happy. Maybe even put in a little more dialogue and thoughts from the characters mind. Anyway, keep it up :)