cheyannerose · 1 decade ago
don't feel bad sweetie, you're not a freak. it's nice for someone to actually show the world what's happening and how disturbing it is,♥
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OzzyPavy · 1 decade ago
Wow this is so sad :(
I hate their Dad, I wanna kill him.
& you're such a great writer. Don't worry about being a freak, it was a graphic but some issues have to be touched upon. So many kids have been through this and it's good to see something they can relate to c:
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DancerGirl24 · 1 decade ago
this was kinda disturbingly graphic but i rlly like the story!!
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PoetApprentice · 1 decade ago
i think that was a very graphic sort of disgusting chapter but it was good and im gonna look out for ur next chapter keep writing!
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unicorn100 · 1 decade ago
you are seriously a great writer...

;0
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mireunlove15 · 1 decade ago
don't be embarrassed you're a great writer and you're able to write about a topic that not many can do. notify please :)
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lostinmyimagination · 1 decade ago
this story is really good! glad i was the 200th fave!
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cupcakexoxo9 · 1 decade ago
I love this story. Even though it can be a little graphic its so addicting to read! i really love reading your stories and they are so good. This is amazing. Keep writing. Please notify me (:
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Imperfectedmuffin · 1 decade ago
I love this. So much.
Every other story on witty is about love, love and more love.
THIS story is about a real issue, a huge issue that has happened in real life numerous times.
And your writing is amazing. Outstanding.
I wouldn't and couldn't have the guts to write something like this.
Just amazing.
Please notify me.
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cupcake_lover88 · 1 decade ago
i am addicted to this book keep writing an i would love a feedback from u on my proulouge tht i posted a cupple weeks ago and plz notify me(:
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Jewel_creek · 1 decade ago

Your not a freak sweetie your story is amazing maybe it's not the happiest story out there but it's about real life problems your so brave for writing what no one is brave enough to write keep at it the story is great I'm on the end of the seat with antisapation waiting for the next chapter cause that's how good it is

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madlytruelydeeply · 1 decade ago
omgod youre story is really good. yeah its a bit graphic but its how it has to be for this type of story to be good, know what i mean? its really well written and i like how well you capture the characters in each chapter keep up the amazing work. and i think its really brave and awesome that you wrote this and it shows your maturity as an author.
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cute4evrnalways · 1 decade ago
Notification pleasex
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XxneoncookiexX · 1 decade ago
keep writing..i love your writing...♥♥
please notify(:♥
and you should become an author:o
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yourbeutiful__trustme · 1 decade ago
it was i dont even know but dont be embarrassed reminder
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---* · 1 decade ago
Notify pleasex
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XXWittyGirlXX · 1 decade ago
dont be embarrassed! its amazing how you have the courage to put this up! i mean it is the truth of.. you know... it was sad and scary... but still amazing as always :Dxx
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Butterfly_Kisses · 1 decade ago
Keep writing your amazing don't be embrassesd your telling the truth that no one has the courage to do !!!!!!!(: Notify me please !
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nofreackingway · 1 decade ago
That guy reminds me of Jerry Sandusky, I heard he said the same exact words to his victims.
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x_ForeverYoung_x · 1 decade ago
You are honestly AMAZING at this,
dont be ashamed or embarrassed,
This is showing people what others go through &&what happening in the world,
You're a true Inspration, Notify me please:)
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