Sally
{{Chapter 1}}
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I woked up and realized I had the necklace still on me. I looked around confused "Where am I?" I asked to myself. Then I had my memory back on, and I noticed I'm at an orphanage & my dad went for a war. I got up, took off my necklace,& got dressed. I went out for the door so I can head to the Cafe & eat breakfast. While passing hallways, I found the Cafe door. I've opened it. All the girls and boys staring at me. It was an awkward silence. " Oh, so your sally" an old women said. " Welcome Sally. I'm the owner so, get something to eat and don't be late again.." While I was walking to get something to eat I looked around. After I got what I wanted I sat down into a lonely table. Then a girl came up " Hi, my name is Emily!" she said. "Hello" I replied. "Omg I love your skinny jeans& your top omg!" she said. "Oh thanks" I said while looking around. While I was looking around, 4 mean looking girls looking at me.. They got up and started walking toward me. "Emily get your butt off that chair and sit with us" one of the mean girls said. "uhh,, umm.. talk to you later Sally" Emily said while walking to there table. *~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~*
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Sally {{Chapter 1}} "I woked up and realized I had the necklace

35 faves · 13 comments · Jun 9, 2012 6:37pm

lovewritingx · 1 decade ago
I like it :)
Just one tiny teeny little thing.
It's all in one big paragraph and that can get a little confusing. When a new person talks, make sure you start a new paragraph because things might get a little confusing :)
Thanks for asking me to read this! (:
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