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Chapter Four
Jack's Point of View

As we walked towards Parker’s car I got the chance to notice all the little things about her that I never saw before. Like how she
constantly plays with a piece of her hair or how her dimples show when she smiles.

“Do you live around here?” I asked.
I felt my stomach do twists and turns while we trudged in the sand. Parker made me feel uneasy, but
it was in a good way. I don’t know how to explain it, she just made me want to know more about her. Everything she did pulled me in.

“No,” She shook her head. “I live in Madison.”

“How long are you staying here?” I asked hopefully. I would be leaving in about a week to go back to school.

“I leave tomorrow morning.” She sighed, and I swear I heard disappointment in her voice. I didn’t say anything back because I knew she would be able to tell I was disappointed too.

We stayed silent for the next few minutes. As we neared her car Parker turned towards me and forced a smile.

“Thanks for inviting me tonight.” She said and held out her hand. I stared at it for a moment then stretched out my arm.

“Thanks for coming.” I shook her hand but didn’t let go.
Instead I pulled her in towards my chest and wrapped my arms around her. Parker tensed up at first, but then gave in and let herself melt into me. We eventually pulled away.

She ducked away from my view but I knew she was smiling. I opened her car door for her. She nodded gratefully and got in the car. I shut the door and leaned on the open window on the driver’s side.

Parker’s Point Of View

I knew if I looked into his eyes I wouldn’t be able to drive away. He just made me feel so god damn happy.

 I avoided his stare even though I knew he could see me blushing. I started the engine and took one last risky glance his way. His deep sea blue eyes were still twinkling in the dim light. Our faces were only a few inches apart.

He was still a stranger to me but I would have given anything for him to kiss me right then and there.

As if reading my mind Jack leaned forward and put his mouth close to my ear.

“It was nice to meet you Parker.” He whispered, “I hope we see each other again.”

 Then he pulled a loose strand of hair away from my eyes and pressed his lips to mine.


There has never been a moment in time where I’ve felt so alive.

 

 

 

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