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~~~Chapter 2~~~
I see the blood spatter on the walls of my 8 year old brother haydens room. I relive walking down the hallway to findhis small, bloodstained figure slouched in a position that was so unnatural looking I automatically knew he wasn't sleeping.

I can smell the tang of his scarlet tears as I cover my mouth to hold in the sobs that fight to free themselves from my chest. I back out of his dinosaur-themed room, now with a sickly red tint to it. I follow the bloody footprints out through the hall and up the prestine white marble staircase. 

A pool of blood was trickling like the red sea down, in a stark contrast to the shiny white rock. I edge around it, afraid to see what was inevitably waiting at the top. 

I scream as I see the face of my best friend Jose, laying in a crumpled bloody ball in the source of the stream of blood.



Thanks for bearing with me here, Hope you like it. Comment ideas and criticisms? thanks <3
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~~~Chapter 2~~~ I see the blood spatter on the walls of my 8

5 faves · 2 comments · Feb 27, 2012 10:35pm

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asiancutie11 · 1 decade ago
:O
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lilschmitty09 · 1 decade ago
the name is supposed to be JOSIE not jose, sorry peoples
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