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/♥/ Perfect NightMare \♥\

 Prologue 

“Skyler, where the f*** are you?” I heard my dad yelling around the house drunk as ever
I hid in the closet with my big brother Alize
 “A-A-Alize” I said sobbing
“Shhhhh, be quiet its okay everything is going to be okay” he said holding me in his arms covering my mouth so my dad wouldn’t hear me crying
“Oh, hiding again huh?” I could hear my dad’s voice coming closer and closer
“Come out now, or ill kill you both” he yelled getting closer
I shut my eyes trying to pretend this was all a dream
Suddenly the door of Alize’s room where we were hiding swung open
I jumped in fear
I was about to scream when Alize placed his hand over my mouth again
“Shhhhh, don’t move” He said whispering to me
I stood as still as I could be
Alize peaked threw a small hole
Everything was quiet I couldn’t hear anything anymore
“He’s gone” Alize whispered to me
When my dad leaves he doesn’t come back till the next day
I hugged Alize tightly as he carried me out of the closet
I shut my eyes trying to stop crying
I opened my eyes and saw my dad standing on back of Alize with a gun in his hand and an evil grin on his face
I yelled
Alize turned around to face my dad
BOOOOOOM

 
I woke up sweating and trembling as tears rolled down my face
Another bad dream remembering what happened that night
My brother Alize was killed by my alcoholic dad
I was 5 when my dad shot him, right in front of me
In a way I feel he was killed because of me
Why couldn’t I speak up and warn Alize?
It was all my fault


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/♥/ Perfect NightMare \♥\ Prologue “Skyler,

12 faves · 3 comments · Feb 13, 2012 11:17am

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jenna211 · 1 decade ago
keep writing this(:
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thegirllikesmusic · 1 decade ago
You need to continue writing this!

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LinkTheHeroOfTime · 1 decade ago
I have an idea for it... :)
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