Chapter 1, Lonley
It's such a quiet
world I live in.
My dad left us when I was 7. He had other children with a
prettier lady. My mom is an acholic now. She's always drunk.
I can't remember the last time I saw her when she wasn't
drunk. We live with my grandma and grandpa, (Granny and Pops),
and my little brother, Ben, died 2 years ago when he
got hit by a car walking to school.
I'm 16 now. I'ts been 9 years since I have seen my
dad, but my whole world came crashing down when I got the
letter.
I was just sitting in Ben's room, holding his sweatshirt as I
always do when Granny and Pops aren't home, when I heard our
dog, Lucky, barking. I looked at the clock, 2:30. The mail just
arrived.
As I sauntered down my stairs, I saw my mom with the mail, just
starting to cry.
" Mom? What's wrong..?" I asked her.
" Nothing. I'm uhh, I'm going to bed. Feed
yourself." She said trying as hard as she could to keep a
straight face. Drunk again. As always.
I started looking through the mail, maybe something was in here
that upset her? Who knows. Could just be taxes. As I
shuffled through the mail, I saw our names. The letter said,
" To my children, Anya and Ben. From Dad." I dropped
the letter on the table. I was shocked. I suddenly felt dizzy. My
world spinning. I just barely made it to my couch before I
colapsed. My breathing was fast, and I was choking. I was wishing
Ben was here. Then I blacked out.
1 faves · 1 comments · Feb 11, 2012 12:32pm
grownsimba · 1 decade ago
waiiiiit, so dad doesn't know that Ben died? wow. or is the letter JUST getting there? I wonder how old Ben was. hmm.
*nods* Je l'aime.
>>on to the next chapter.
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