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"Cade Matthews? Hi this is detective Lawrence. I'm calling to notfiy you that we have found your parents car at the bottom of Lake Chelan, I'm sorry to inform you that your family seems to have not survived the crash. I am so sorry for your lose and will be sending over an officer to your residence shortly."

I sat there on the kitchen floor replaying the message over and over again. Remy would be over any minute wondering why my dad hasn't returned any of her phone calls since she came back from her Missionary Trip to the Philippines.. Remy was my stepmom, and has been for the past six years. She isn't like most stepmoms whose stepkids hate. No she's just right.

"Hello?"  I stand up quickly. Who is it? It can't be the police no car pulled up. I quietly go to the window to see who it could be. Standing there at the door is a boy. His black hair covering one of his gorgeous hazel eyes. His light brown skin and........
"Hello? I can see you." He said with a slightly irrated smile on his face. 
"Oh sorry" I rushed to the door but quickly wiping my face before opening the door.
"Ummm, Yes? Can I help you?" Trying to sound casual as if he didn't just catch me staring at him through the window. "Yes, are you Cade? Cade Matthews?" He said with a slight smile on his face. "Yes I am, and who might you be?" I was curious to know who this gorgeous guy was. "I'm...." Just as he was about to finish telling me who he was a police car drove up my drive with Remy right behind it. "Cade? Cade honey I'm so sorry. Don't worry, I'm here okay? I'm here."
I didn't want to cry infront of my mystery guy but I could feel the tears coming. I tried to hold them back while Remy held me, rubbing my back telling me things I couldn't quite understand. "Cade? I'll see you around. Bye. " Before I could say anything he disapeared into nowhere.
And next thing I knew everything went black, yet I could still the hear voices.  



Hi Witty, 
This is my second day on Witty&&My first story. Please tell me what you think. 
Thank You,
Naerisiae (:



 
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A Change of Heart Chapter 1 "Cade Matthews? Hi this is detective

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AdorableNaera · 1 decade ago
Yahh, I totally could&&thakn you(:

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CertifiedBarbie · 1 decade ago
I like it so far. do you think you can post a chapter a day? :) if you could give me some feedback on my story, that woud be great :)
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