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Losing Hope
Chapter One


I sat in the lobby of my local hospital. My elbows were rested on my knees, and I interlocked my fingers and rested my head on them. My mom went to the bathroom. She said she had to go pee, but her voice started to quiver when she was talking. “Mommy, what’s wrong with that girl.” A little girl next to me whispered to her mother. I looked up at her. She was about four or five. Her hair was completely shaved off and she had a breathing tube in her nose. I smiled. Trying not to look nervous. But her bright green eyes just stared at me. Her mother looked up from her magazine. She grabbed the little girl and sat her on her lap. My smile faded and I looked back down at the floor. “Hi sweetie.” My mom sighed as she sat in the seat next to me. I looked at her. Her face was wet and her eyes were red and puffy. She’d been crying. I tried to avoid eye contact. My eyes started to sting and I got a lump in the back of my throat. “Mom, I’m gonna r-.” A squeak of a door cut me off. My eyes shot up. A doctor and a nurse, who helped me take my test, walked toward us. I got up and stuck out my hand to greet the doctor. I noticed my hand was shaking and I stuck it in my coat pocket. “Hello Nia.” The doctor said. “I’m doctor Gadge.” His eyes showed sorrow. My heart stopped and waited for the bad news. I sat back down in my seat. The soft cushioning sunk, just as the same time as my stomach. “Nia.” Doctor Gadge went on. “I’m sorry, but I may have bad news.” My mom grabbed my hand. “Mrs. Dulce, I’m afraid Nai has,” He paused. My eyes shot towards him. “Has, Melanoma skin cancer.” The earth stopped. Stopped breathing, stopped spinning, stopped living. I could feel every bone in my body turn into jelly. My mom dropped my hand and ran to the bathroom. I found my spot on the floor again. And took a deep breath. Doctor Gadge touched my should. “I’m so sorry.” He whispered. Then left, with the nurse trailing behind him. I looked up, and saw the little girls green eyes locked onto mine. Her hand stuck out in front of her. “Hello, my name is Hope.”

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Losing Hope Chapter One I sat in the lobby of my local hospital.

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niapickles · 1 decade ago
Hey my names Nia..
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