Witty Profiles

menu
sign in or join


 I Never Wanted To Leave
      

A Short Story Part 1
  
The cars on the expressway zoomed by us as we headed in the opposite direction. I took my gaze away from the window and focused it on the clock. It read 9:37. I looked over at my sister who was sitting next to me. She was barely 18 and wore a blue Areo sweater and jeans. Her hair was pushed back with a head band so that her curls were not in her face. My mother, who sat in the front seat, was wearing a red jacket and black pants. She pulled down the visor on the passenger side revealing a mirror so she could fix her make-up. My father was in the driver’s seat wearing a green t-shirt and shorts despite the fact that it was early January. My father was the type of person who would wear shorts all year long and act like it was normal.
 
I drew my attention back to the cars outside on the expressway. I was mesmerized the headlights from the on coming traffic and the peaceful silence that filled the car. As I watched all the cars zoom past us, across the median made of grass, I took notice to one car in particular, a green Ford truck that was driving on the other side of the expressway. There was nothing unusual about the truck in any way but I couldn’t help but notice it. The truck seemed to jump out at me like a nickel in a jar of pennies. I closed my eyes for a moment thinking about the headlights against the clear night sky. I re-opened my eyes searching for my green truck when I saw it. The truck was speeding across the median and was heading straight for us.
 
My father swerved us in an attempt to get us out of harms way but his efforts came a moment to late. The truck made contact with our car sending us crashing into the wall that lined the outside of the lanes. I grabbed onto the back of the driver’s seat tried to turn my head away from the window. The car began to roll as we were hit again by a car from behind us. I felt a stinging pain in my leg only to look down and see that it was pinned under a piece of the car door. The glass shattered all over me cutting up my arm and my face. I looked over at my sister who was crying as we made our final impact with the wall. My head jerked forward towards the back of the seat then back again towards the reminder of the door where it made contact. And that’s when everything stopped.

I just started this it's the first part of a short story I'm working on....
Comment what you think and Fav if you like it :)
Next Quote >

I Never Wanted To Leave A Short Story Part 1 The cars on the

0 faves · Jan 10, 2012 9:43pm

aleexturneer

by

aleexturneer


tags

story