OliviaLee · 1 decade ago
LOVE♥
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TheBestEver13 · 1 decade ago
Ohmigod I need another chapter RIGHT NOW!! D: (:
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julie2552 · 1 decade ago
Awesomly awesome. Sorry I haven't been commenting lately. I'm super busy. But I'm reading actively now!
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JazzySnow · 1 decade ago
I think they were bffs when they were realy little
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JustMex · 1 decade ago
its great!
I cant wait to read more! (: xxx oh and well done on getting a top quote :3 xxx
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annaxlovesxfruit · 1 decade ago
More :3
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smilexlaughxlove · 1 decade ago
plzzzz add moreeee!!!!!!!!! r tony and ava ex- lovers or something?????????????
p.s. i get if you cant post 2morrow, its sunday.
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xXxForeverxYoursxXx · 1 decade ago
omg i wanna know u should post the next chapter oh idk... right now :D
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XoXoLaLaLaXoXo · 1 decade ago
POST TONIGHT OR I WILL DIE.
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Nickii · 1 decade ago
Oooooh I like it. I can't wait to find out how they know eachother

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takemetoneverland* · 1 decade ago
MORE !!
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josie_c1995 · 1 decade ago
i like the comment thing better ;p
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4everfin13 · 1 decade ago
Its amazing!
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nicolebudz1234 · 1 decade ago
soo good big fan
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christy_deimling · 1 decade ago
its good. kinda confusing at first but its good.
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emmzy14 · 1 decade ago
lol and omg im dying ot know and just to make sure... alex and tony are brothers? or friends?
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turgeonite2 · 1 decade ago
yes im dying! ;-p
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fableliz · 1 decade ago
lol loveyou4ever i did notice that she propblaby wanted to get the idea out and maybe she kinda rushed but so what it was still awesome :)
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loveyou4ever · 1 decade ago
looking good, sorry, i'm so nit picky, but just make sure your proff read first you said ava looks at ava at one point. once ava and tony are really intereacting make sure you make it clear whose chapter the point of view is from. don't let all the action come to soon especially if you are unsure. your doing a great job with keeping it moving but not to fast. if you want me to shut up on these comments about all this i totally can
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