Can’t Control
Love
Chapter Twenty-Five/Melody’s
POV:
I was awake all night, thinking about the most
perfect night I’ve just had. “Good morning!” I
sang, meeting my parents in the kitchen that morning for
breakfast. They were bewildered by my surprisingly pleasantness
this early in the morning. “How was the concert?” my
mother asked placing a plate filled with eggs, bacon and toast.
“Unbelievable!” I answered. I turned on the kitchen
tv to E news. I turned the volume up after seeing a picture of
Chase. “Chase Willkins finished his first tour last night
right here in LA. He said it was a life changing experience that
he’ll never forget.” The blonde woman informed us,
smiling with her bright white teeth. “Last night was the
best performance of the tour. Chase decided to play his rendition
of the hit song Miss You. It was an acoustic version that was
better than the original and had the crowd screaming for more. He
also played a new song that had not been released yet that he
wrote on tour for a special girl. It was a love song and before
playing it he announced that he meant each bit of the lyrics.
After the concert fans kept asking who this special girl could
be. Here at E, we put together all the clues and concluded that
the special girl is in fact Melody, Chase’s best friend. It
was quite clear in the lyrics that it was her plus one of our
paparazzi got a picture of them later that night.” A
picture of Chase and I walking, holding hands on the way to his
car from the park flashed before the screen. “Sorry ladies,
looks like Chase is taken and it looks like this relationship is
going to last a long time.” A commercial went on straight
after. My parents both stared at me in disbelief.
“That’s so great! We love Chase, he’s perfect
for you!” my mother said. I rolled my eyes.
“Thanks.” My dad shook his head in
agreement.
Shortly after the doorbell rang.
“That’s him.” I said bashfully. “Well, I
have to go run some Christmas errands.” My dad said
grabbing his car keys. My mom just stood there washing the
dishes. My dad stared at her. “Oh, right me too. You kids
have fun.” she said following him out the garage
door.
I sprinted over to the front door to let him in.
“Hey Chase.” I swooned. “Hey Mel.” he
said sounding not as enthusiastic as I was. “What’s
wrong?” I asked with concern. “Nothing.” he
said quietly. We walked into the living room, he examined the
perfectly decorated Christmas tree. “Melody,” he
started. I got nervous, he said my name in a very serious name.
He wasn’t going to say he didn’t feel what I was
feeling and wanted to go back to being friends; right? “I
know now you’re my girlfriend, actually you’re more
than that you’re more like my soul mate or true love.
Anyways, what I’m trying to say is ‘cause we’re
dating now I don’t want to loose the friendship we had. I
want to be able to come tell you everything and for you to be
there for me.” I nodded my head, “I agree
completely.” I told him, still a bit nervous. “Mel,
last night, when I got home I saw my parents kissing.” he
told me, looking at me directly in the eye. “What?!”
I asked in disbelief. “They were outside of my mom’s
room kissing. I don’t even know how long this has been
going on. Maybe the only reason my mom has been back to normal
was because he was back. The thing that hurts the most is they
hid this from me, they’re seeing each other behind my
back.” I gave him a hug to comfort him, “I’m so
sorry. You have to talk to your mom.” I assured him. He
nodded, “I will.”
After talking about the whole issue with his
parents, he helped me wrap Christmas presents. “You suck at
this.” I joked taking the scissors away from him. He
laughed, “I’ll just hand you tape.” The sound
of Christmas music and the smell of hot chocolate wafted from the
kitchen. “So the media confirmed us as a couple.” I
mentioned while taping the wrapping paper on my mom’s new
blender. “Trisha told me. She says it’s good
publicity or whatever. More people will follow me if I have a
love interest.” We continued to wrap more presents,
“Mel, listen there’s this big Hollywood Christmas
party this weekend and I was wondering if maybe you’d want
to come.” he asked shyly. “I’d love to.”
I answered back, smiling. “It’s a date then.”
he stated with a cute half-smile.
Kind of boring, sorry! Check back
later tonight, I MIGHT write another chapter!
So I was wondering (comment below with
your answer); would you rather have this story be 35 chapters
long and then have me start a brand new story (which is going to
be amazing! I’ve got it all planned out!) or would you like
me to make this story super long and be like 50 chapters. Let me
know, but remember Ih have the final say. Thanks everyone for
faving/commenting!!!
119 faves · 59 comments · Dec 12, 2011 4:17pm
mariahb306
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1 decade ago
50 pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee<3
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FaaizaLovesYou
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1 decade ago
I think you should do 50, but have a biiiig twist or something :D
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pandapilar23
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1 decade ago
make it as much as you can because i really really like this story and i mean you will always have time to start a new story, but its alot harder to go back to one
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YourWorstDayDream
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1 decade ago
you should make it 50 since you would still write the story after this one.
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HashtagWhoreo*
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1 decade ago
50 great story though i wish i had the book my self
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smileyheart17
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1 decade ago
50 chapters..only if it doesnt get boring thoughhh. then start a new book:) haha
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quinnyy301
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1 decade ago
write more, and then once your done with this one.. write the other!!!
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unibugsrock
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1 decade ago
AMAZING! And I'm not sure. I think it would be nice to wrap up the story, and I bet the new one will be even better! (if that's possible!) So anyways, it would be nice to wrap it up, but that's only my opinion. It was actually hard to choose! :)
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horse_rider_hottie97
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1 decade ago
35
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holdmeandneverletgo
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1 decade ago
35! i agree with superfish12!! :]
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viperchick
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1 decade ago
35(:
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bazfifi
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1 decade ago
50
then theres lots of time for good details
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Cheer_Love7
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1 decade ago
35 chapters; I like new things now and then
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rockmywurld145
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1 decade ago
35 :D
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clemsoncookie
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1 decade ago
35 (: LOOOOVE this story so much. your an amazing writer
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ImC00likethat
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1 decade ago
35 chapters? :)
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pakiprincezz4
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1 decade ago
Omgg!! you are fricken amazing!!
I think us should write moree..if u no what to write about..or make and ending and write new..either way i <3 it!!
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livelifeforever
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1 decade ago
hmmmmm this is hard how bout in between :)
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annabananaaa11
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1 decade ago
i think 35, idk where lse you can go with this besides the parents
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loveisthemovement22 · 1 decade ago
(:♥
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