♥
The Wrong Guy ♥
Have
you ever fallen in love with the wrong guy? One who you never
planned to even look at? One you never planned to want? One who
makes your world turn upside down? One who all your friends and
family disapprove of?
I have.
Hi, my name is Tabitha and this is my
story.
Chapter
33
We all sat in silence around Jake, drowning in
our own thoughts when i felt something move
Jake's hand. His fingers moved slightly but that was enough
to give me hope. I looked up into his face, praying that he would
get up and indeed, his eyes wrestled themselves opened. His eyes
landed on me first and his lips curled up into a smile.
"Tabitha."
"I'm right here," i said, tears around the rims of
my eyes.
"What happened?" he asked.
"There was a car accident. You got it pretty bad." His
voice was croaky and kind of slow as if he was weak.
"Oh, yea. I'm sorry i didn't get you home. Is your
mom okay?"
"She was mad but i survived." Ever since my mom and
Miss Salter came back in, they were both quiet, not saying a word
until now.
"Jake?" Miss Salter said, sitting up. Jake slowly moved
his head to her.
"Hey, mom."
"Baby, i was so worried about you."
"Sorry," was all he said. Then he noticed Chris.
"Hey, man. What are you doing?"
"Your girlfriend picked up when i called and explained. This
is bad man, why would you do this?" Jake chuckled.
"You talk as if i did it on purpose."
"You wouldn't dream of it."
"You know me too well." Jake looked around and saw my
mom.
"You must be Miss Price," he said, addressing my mother
who simply nodded. "Well, this is a unique way to meet your
girlfriend's mom, huh?" he chuckled and i giggled with
him.
"Only you could be half dead and make jokes," i said to
him. Just then, the doctor came in.
"Oh, you're awake. That's great," she said
smiling at us. She looked down at her clipboard. "Well,
you've suffered quite a bit. What you need to do it rest and
then-" She stopped as she looked up us the machines around
him.
"What's wrong?" I asked.
"His heartbeat is slowing down. That's not normal. That
means..."
"My baby is not leaving me," Miss Salter said to Dr.
Clayton.
"I'm sorry," was all the doctor said. We all looked
at Jake, fresh tears in our eyes.
"Jake, baby, you can't leave me. I need you." Miss
Salter looked devestated.
"Hey, mom. Is it true. That you only drink to stop worrying
about me at night?" Miss Salter quietly nodded at him.
"Mom, I'm so sorry. I never realized it until now. If i
had know, i never would have done all the things i do."
"That's okay. Right now, just try not to leave
me."
"I'm trying." Then he looked at my mom. "Miss
Price. I know i may not have been the best influence on your
daughter and i made her do quite a few things that she
shouldn't be proud of. But all i did was out of love. And
I'm sorry if i upset you with any of my actions." I was
as surprised as my mother at his formalness.
"I don't care about that right now. I just want you to
live." Jake smiled at her and moved on to Chris.
"It was nice knowing ya, man. Do me a favour. Take care of her for
me please," Jake said, gesturing to me.
"Will do," Chris replied. Then finally, Jake looked at
me.
"Come here," he said, motioning my face closer.
"What is it?"
"I love you." It was the first time he said it. I had
never dreamed that it would be said on his death bed. But just
those three words filled me with a sense of security.
"I love you too," i said to him. I saw his eyes smile
at me then they started to droop. "No, please, don't
leave me. Jake. Jake!" I sobbed hysterically as his eyes
closed for the last time.
22 faves · 20 comments · Oct 13, 2011 11:25pm
pakiprincezz4
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1 decade ago
aww thats soo sadd =(( im just gonna pretend he lived and they both had a happy life..=)
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britt459*
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1 decade ago
omg, this story was AMAZING<3 i'm in tears. at the end i thought of my boyfriend and i cant imagine what it'd be like to have him die. your a really good writer(:
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Tamika_Ashl3y
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1 decade ago
i loved this story, cried at the end but loved it :) i am starting your Spring Love story now... You are great, please keep writing stories :D
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Alot_Like_Love
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1 decade ago
I loved the story..but I started tearing up at the end!!!! Thanks for writing this :D I'm going to start your Spring Love story now :)
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Kumba15
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1 decade ago
Amazing story but omg the while story made me wanna cry D:
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hunnybunnylove143
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1 decade ago
omgggg nooooo im crying love this storyy
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Chickalic2
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1 decade ago
I Honestly Hate The Ending )":
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blahblahstories
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1 decade ago
CookieMonstaLuver:
you're right, he did meet her mom before. I'm so sorry about that. I totally forget. But i guess thats what happens when you write stories at 11 at night eh?
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sweetkiller9858
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1 decade ago
OMG !! Love it! mahhd sad though :(
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MissRingo11
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1 decade ago
Awesome! Buts sad...
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missashlibb
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1 decade ago
aww jake died... =(
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CookieMonstaLuver
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1 decade ago
didnt he already meet her mom?
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blahblahstories
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1 decade ago
omg i thought you guys would all hate me for killing him
you guys have no idea how happy you all just made me by actually liking the ending. I love you all soo much for this <3
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upanddown143
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1 decade ago
that was an amazing story thank you so much for writing it!
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wooser_waycee
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1 decade ago
i burst into tearss! best story EVER♥
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Chickalic2
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1 decade ago
Sooo Saaad )':
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Minimoo99
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1 decade ago
I cried
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VballGirl22
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1 decade ago
woahhhh. i just read the whole story and that. was. amazing. < 3
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allieangel
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1 decade ago
thats my life story... falling for the wrong guy. it hurts < 3
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what_do_i_do · 1 decade ago
omygosh nooo!!!
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