lies.
CH5
present
mariannas pov
jamie grabbed my shaky hand. i took in a
deep breath. all i smelt was body odor and cabbage.
the tent was huge, well actually it turned out to be a hallway or
entrance to the barn... which had become the dance club for
the night. Jamie ran off to the dance floor and i made my self to
the bar over to the right.
as i took my seat i felt someone come up to where i was
sitting.
"can i get you anything?" the figure asked.
i looked up and saw a well built guy that couldn't be more
than 20 in front of me.
"erm, you got diet coke?" i asked with a crooked
smile.
"you dont look like you need it..." he joke
i sarcastically laughed... it was true, being 17, i was pretty
small. my doctor told me i was underweight, but its not like i
was going to eat sugar all the time just so i could fatten
up.
he came back with a tall glass filled to the rim and still
bubbling. he put it on a coaster and leaned back on the
counter.
i looked to my left and right to see why he wasnt helping any
other characters. i found my answer.... i was the only one.
"so, whats your name?" he asked trying to strike up a
conversation.
"Marianna, but my friends call me Mari."
"nice to meet you mari." he leaned came forward to the
counter. i took a long sip from my glass. the music was blasting
so i could barely hear anything he said, unless he yelled it.
"forrest." he said extending his hand for me to
shake.
"like forest gump?" i joked.
he laughed sarcastically, imitating how i reacted to his
joke.
i kinda liked this guy :)
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so im standing in the middle of the apple store, typing up my
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7 faves · 2 comments · Jun 25, 2011 2:20pm
last_breath
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1 decade ago
sorry for the typos:
chacters *customers
and he leaned came forward *he leaned forward
sorry :( I'll do better!
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guitargirl13 · 1 decade ago
amazing!!!
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