When
the sun sets
part
4
*sorry its been so long, write more soon!
(feeback)
I
watched my sister's shadow turn the corner, then i grabbed my
phone and walked downstairs. I twisted my hair into a high bun on
top of my head and opened the fridge. I grabbed a gatorade and
twisted the cap off. There was a knock on the front door. I
slowly crept toward the door.
"why
the heck are you here!?" I exclaimed.
"Well...
I missed you." Chris smiled. I had to admit it was kinda creepy
that he was standing here on my front step, but at the same time
it was cute.
"You
missed me?" I repeated.
"Mhm.
That's why I'm standing right here, right now." He gestured to my
house as he said that. I smiled and rolled my eyes. Then, he took
my hand.
"Why-"
Chris stopped me.
"Come
on, Rachel!" He exclaimed.
"Where
are we going?" I looked deep into his eyes.
"You'll
see." He gazed back.
"I'm
not going with you until you tell me where we are going." I
raised an eyebrow.
"Trust
me, you'll love it."
"But
Chris, I look like crap!" I argued.
"You've
never looked better." He got closer to my face as he said
'better'.
I
blushed. I stepped out of my house and stood outside with him. An
old couple was walking by, admiring our flowers in the front
yard. Chris grabbed my waist and pulled me in close. I went on my
tip toes and wrapped my arms around his neck. He leaned in and he
gave me a long, passionate kiss. I could feel the old couple
watching us. after what seemed like forever, he let go of my
waist.
"Ready
to go?" He looked down at me.
"Let's
go." I smiled.
**as lame as this sounds, i got
butterflies writing this... feedback please!:)
4 faves · 5 comments · May 12, 2011 10:46pm
dontxletxmexfallx18
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1 decade ago
thanks!!:)
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FutureWriter324
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1 decade ago
Don't stopp I can't waitt to see what happensss. :)
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dontxletxmexfallx18
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1 decade ago
thanks:)
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Max24
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1 decade ago
You're a great writer, don't stop :)
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FutureWriter324 · 1 decade ago
you should make thenext partt soon, I'm waitingg!! :D
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