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With Green Eyes
Chapter:42

Once Carter came over, dinner was ready. He ate with us and seemed to make a good impression. Not that it really mattered or anything since he made a good  impression on Taylor. My mom and Luke seemed like they could careless about him. Todd talked to him a lot but still. Carter is more like a fun few weeks relationship. That may sound bad but I think we'd be better as friends anyways. After dinner we went for a walk. He was pretty quiet. I was too.
"So what you thinking about?"He asked.
"Us."I said.
"Same."He replied.
"Good or bad?"I asked.
"Not sure yet."He replied.
"Same."I said. It may sound like this conversation would be awkward but it wasn't. But like I said Carter and I seemed like we would be more friends than boyfriend and girlfriend. But we are boyfriend and girlfriend which is good I guess.
"You look really pretty today."He said once we got to my house.
"Thanks. You look pretty good today too."I said and he smiled. He gave me a kiss, still with no spark.
"Bye."He said smiling.
"Bye."I smiled back.
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The week flew by and it was already the weekend. Well Friday night atleast. Luke and my mom left today to go on their hunnymoon since they never went on one in September and it was October now. They were going to Europe. I was stuck here all alone to go visit my dads grave alone on his anniversery coming up this Tuesday. I've been there alone before but not on that day. I pushed that aside though so I wont get upset over it. Its a Friday night and Carter is taking me to some party. Not a dressy party but a house party. Todd, Brett, and Aubrey were going too. I was going to Aubreys house before. Which was where I was walking to with Todd and Brett. I was in the lead and they were following.
"How are you doing?"Todd asked me once we were walking up the steps to Aubreys house.
"Huh?"I said.
"You know with your mom not being home for the week your dad passed away."He said giving me the stare. I cringed at it.
"Alright for now, I guess."I replied. Todd went inside.
"You hate it when people give you that look too?"Brett asked.
"Yeah. You don't give it to me though. That what I like about you."I said.
"Thats cause I know how it feels and woah! Woah. Woah. Woah. Did you just say you actually like something about me? Me?"He said jokingly.
"Hey its only one thing and I still don't like you. Thats just a good thing about you plus you drive."I said walking away into the house. I went downstairs to where Todd Aubrey and Billy were.
"Hey Charli."Billy said smiling.
"Hey Billiumm."I said back while Brett was walking down the steps. I call Billy that since his real name is William and its fun to say.
Aubrey looked up at me examing my outfit.
"I like it."She said smiling. Probably because she picked it out the day before.We stayed at her house for an hour and then left to go to the party. I was meeting Carter there. At the party, everyone was pretty wild and the music was really loud. There were people dancing and people were inside and outside. I found Carter outside.
"Hey babe."He said smiling.
"Hey."I said and smiled back. He patted his lap and I sat down on it. He was talking to a few  of his friends.
"Yo Charliii."Said Joe.
"Wait this is Charli?"A guy asked. I looked at him and recognized him. He was Alex  from the skatepark.
"Yeah."I said being polite.
"Well then, I guess what I've heard is true."He said winking at me. Carter didn't seem to notice.
"So how was your day?"Carter asked me.
"Alright I guess.  Yours?"I replied.
"Pretty good."He replied.
We talked to his friends for a while.
Then he asked me to dance so I did. We danced to the fast songs and it was fun.

Bretts Point Of View
God, she looks so beautiful. Charli, I mean. She looks like she's having so much fun just dancing around. I've never seen her dance before and she's pretty good. Woah. What am I thinking. Charli doesn't like me like that. She doesn't like me period. But I can't help it. She's her. She's Charli and no other girl can compare to her. To bad she's with Carter.

Charli's
Point Of View

After we danced for a while, we went back to Carters friends. We talked with them for a while. Then a girl came over and asked Carter to dance with her. He looked at me and I told him he could go. I don't really care if he dances with her. Alex came by me and started talking to me. It was really awkward. Then Brett came by and grabbed my hand pulling me up.
"We're dancing."He said.
"No we're not."I said sitting back down. He looked over to Alex and I remembered how awkward  it was just sitting next to Alex so I followed Brett. It was a fast song, so we started dancing how all teenagers do except I didn't grind on him because thats just weird and I don't do that. Carter was watching us too but he was still dancing with the other girl.

Carters
Point Of View
Charli looked like she was having a good time with Brett. The way she looks at him sometimes , just like now, makes me think she may like him. She doesn't look at me that way. I know I've though this before but I can't help it. I can't believe a girl like Charli would even be with me. I looked to the girl I was dancing with. She was pretty and funny. I would go out with her, but she's not as great as Charli. I don't know why I'm thinking this. Think good thoughts Carter. Good thoughts.

Charli's
Point Of View
It was fun dancing but after a while we stopped. Carter stopped too and came by me. We went inside and watched tv for a while. Then everyone started leaving so Todd came and got me and we walked home along with Aubrey and Brett.
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With Green Eyes Chapter:42 Once Carter came over, dinner was

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omgitshaley123 · 1 decade ago
i absolutley love this story, it's above amazingg!, and i can't wait to read more.(:
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beadleslover · 1 decade ago
wow you are an amazing writer! Never stop! Im in love with this story! You really have a talent! :) I enjoy reading your story! NOrmally, i don't like reading! But this story is amazing!!
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kimshi125 · 1 decade ago
thats realllllllllly good.! i like it alot you should right more about it like what happens with charli and carter! is that based on a true story?
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