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we all have that one night

where your done putting up a fight
your crying your eyes out
we went so wrong, no doubt
ill never forget our past
or how we fell in love so fast
ill never forget your lips on mine
or the way you called me 'oh so fine'
i used to love you
i probably still do
well you took my heart,
but now were breaking apart <3

we all have that one night

where your done putting up a fight
your crying your eyes out
we went so wrong, no doubt
i used to love you
i probably still do
ill never forget our first kiss
oh how i miss
you were always there for me
now were breaking free </3

which is better?
&which parts should i change or are good?
iwanna make it better so help pleaseee:)

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