xxForeverMyselfxx
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1 decade ago
Just take it slow. Take a deep breath before, and remember to breathe. If you get uncomfortabl.. stop. He'll understand. But it really just comes naturally. reply
julie_urzua
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1 decade ago
this reminded me of what happened to me and my guy bff in my opinion just tell him your sorry if he is your friend he'll forgive you. . .that's what my guy bff did. . .i wish you luck reply
xoloveforeverxo21
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1 decade ago
thanks! any title suggestions? reply
xoloveforeverxo21
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1 decade ago
and i was wondering if u could tell people about my storyy?? i really wannt peoplpe to readd it! reply
xoloveforeverxo21
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1 decade ago
hahah thank you so muchh! and yes i do understannd
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stillwaitingforyou
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1 decade ago
its pretty good. just heres my advice; dont start a story off with descriptions. your goal is to try to grab the readers attention. also it seems like in the first paragraph every sentecne starts with he or we. and try to make the dialogue realistic. for example i wouldnt say to my friend "im finding a hot guy." but besides that it looks like you have a good start. and for the title just think about what your storys gonna be about and pretend ur naming a song title. does that make sense? haha sorry that was confusing! reply
xoloveforeverxo21 · 1 decade ago
thankkkkkss(:
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natalieeeroseee · 1 decade ago
it just comes naturally i recently had the same prob hahah but trust me it works out, it just kinda happens
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xoloveforeverxo21 · 1 decade ago
thank you(:
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xxForeverMyselfxx · 1 decade ago
Just take it slow. Take a deep breath before, and remember to breathe. If you get uncomfortabl.. stop. He'll understand. But it really just comes naturally.
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xoloveforeverxo21 · 1 decade ago
thank you
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julie_urzua · 1 decade ago
this reminded me of what happened to me and my guy bff in my opinion just tell him your sorry if he is your friend he'll forgive you. . .that's what my guy bff did. . .i wish you luck
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xoloveforeverxo21 · 1 decade ago
thanks! any title suggestions?
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woaahhthatsaquote · 1 decade ago
nice! :)
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xoloveforeverxo21 · 1 decade ago
and i was wondering if u could tell people about my storyy?? i really wannt peoplpe to readd it!
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xoloveforeverxo21 · 1 decade ago
hahah thank you so muchh! and yes i do understannd
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stillwaitingforyou · 1 decade ago
its pretty good. just heres my advice; dont start a story off with descriptions. your goal is to try to grab the readers attention. also it seems like in the first paragraph every sentecne starts with he or we. and try to make the dialogue realistic. for example i wouldnt say to my friend "im finding a hot guy." but besides that it looks like you have a good start. and for the title just think about what your storys gonna be about and pretend ur naming a song title. does that make sense? haha sorry that was confusing!
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