SecretLife96
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9 years ago
It's good for anyone lol. I just like writing to be honest so when I saw that ya could get headed on it, I was like "peer edit time!" Lol reply
ItsJustChey_*
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9 years ago
aw man I remember when I had to read the book in freshman year. That was only last year but it seems like so long ago. This is really good, you did a great job. reply
SecretLife96
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9 years ago
Hey, so I read this and I wanted to say it's good, but I think it could do a little better. Like I feel like the first paragraph wasn't as compelling and also be careful when you name the book, the commas and such is confusing. And don't forget to underline the book title (add the author...unless it was an autobiography). Just check the essay again. If you don't wanna make any of these changes, I get it, just trying to help. Maybe have someone else proofread it too(: anyway, sorry if that was rude!! reply
chandelllle
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1 decade ago
I have loads of weird dreams like that! reply
fallenangel*
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1 decade ago
happens to me all the time reply
beebessey
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1 decade ago
I do that all the friggin time! reply
Niichole
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1 decade ago
oh my god it happens to me all the time and it freaks me out man reply
zeldachick♥♪★♀†(^-^)*
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1 decade ago
one time i dream't that i got up and ate breakfast, and then i got up and ate breakfast the exact same way reply
thepanda
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1 decade ago
A BURN?!? you made fun of some one for a thing they had no control over know one wants to be a sl/t she might have had issues growing up that "made" her one. YOU HAVE NO AUTHORITY TO JUDGE PEOPLE FOR THEIR MISTAKES.No one likes being judge by other people i found this "quote" very ignorant. reply
WantingTheEnd
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1 decade ago
I know this is a late comment, but happy birthday! Getting older is scary, but it's worth it, once you start getting through the teenage years things get a little easier, trust me :3 xx reply
LiveTheDream
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1 decade ago
I refer to my dad as George Lopez, they look similar lol reply
BrandonO
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1 decade ago
Nothing but winning lol. reply
Searchingforpurpose*
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1 decade ago
If I'm not mistaken it's Smitty Werben Jagerman Jensen.... but he was #1. reply
LiveTheDream
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1 decade ago
he said he's leaving it up for a couple more days lol reply
5helby
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1 decade ago
Sorry to disappoint you but that was Saturday... Not today. reply
ForeverOneDirection
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1 decade ago
hi, im sorry to be a bother but please go check my recent quote it is a real problem that i am having and i would like to hear what you think! thanks :xoxo http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/6709735 reply
InsertAliasHere
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1 decade ago
I think it would be harder to watch the person you love, die reply
SecretLife96 · 9 years ago
*graded
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SecretLife96 · 9 years ago
It's good for anyone lol. I just like writing to be honest so when I saw that ya could get headed on it, I was like "peer edit time!" Lol
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ItsJustChey_* · 9 years ago
aw man I remember when I had to read the book in freshman year. That was only last year but it seems like so long ago. This is really good, you did a great job.
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SecretLife96 · 9 years ago
Hey, so I read this and I wanted to say it's good, but I think it could do a little better. Like I feel like the first paragraph wasn't as compelling and also be careful when you name the book, the commas and such is confusing. And don't forget to underline the book title (add the author...unless it was an autobiography). Just check the essay again. If you don't wanna make any of these changes, I get it, just trying to help. Maybe have someone else proofread it too(: anyway, sorry if that was rude!!
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supercalifredge · 1 decade ago
It wouldn't be hard.
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chandelllle · 1 decade ago
I have loads of weird dreams like that!
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fallenangel* · 1 decade ago
happens to me all the time
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beebessey · 1 decade ago
I do that all the friggin time!
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Niichole · 1 decade ago
oh my god it happens to me all the time and it freaks me out man
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zeldachick♥♪★♀†(^-^)* · 1 decade ago
one time i dream't that i got up and ate breakfast, and then i got up and ate breakfast the exact same way
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thepanda · 1 decade ago
A BURN?!? you made fun of some one for a thing they had no control over know one wants to be a sl/t she might have had issues growing up that "made" her one. YOU HAVE NO AUTHORITY TO JUDGE PEOPLE FOR THEIR MISTAKES.No one likes being judge by other people i found this "quote" very ignorant.
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InsertAliasHere · 1 decade ago
grow up
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WantingTheEnd · 1 decade ago
I know this is a late comment, but happy birthday! Getting older is scary, but it's worth it, once you start getting through the teenage years things get a little easier, trust me :3 xx
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LiveTheDream · 1 decade ago
I refer to my dad as George Lopez, they look similar lol
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BrandonO · 1 decade ago
Nothing but winning lol.
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Searchingforpurpose* · 1 decade ago
If I'm not mistaken it's Smitty Werben Jagerman Jensen.... but he was #1.
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LiveTheDream · 1 decade ago
he said he's leaving it up for a couple more days lol
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5helby · 1 decade ago
Sorry to disappoint you but that was Saturday... Not today.
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ForeverOneDirection · 1 decade ago
hi, im sorry to be a bother but please go check my recent quote it is a real problem that i am having and i would like to hear what you think! thanks :xoxo http://www.wittyprofiles.com/q/6709735
reply
InsertAliasHere · 1 decade ago
I think it would be harder to watch the person you love, die
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