eemilyy_ffrancoiss
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1 decade ago
i know all the music in my head i just dont like to ryhme and i dont write out the chorus. its really weird reading it like that because you dont have the music but thank you ill keep that stuff in mind reply
formyeyesonly2
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1 decade ago
the words are good... but there's no ryming, no verse, no chorus... I think what you're trying to say is good... you just need to work on the proper song format :) tell me when you make your improvments!! I would love to read it when it's done!! :) good luck!! :D reply
eemilyy_ffrancoiss · 1 decade ago
i know all the music in my head i just dont like to ryhme and i dont write out the chorus. its really weird reading it like that because you dont have the music but thank you ill keep that stuff in mind
reply
formyeyesonly2 · 1 decade ago
the words are good... but there's no ryming, no verse, no chorus... I think what you're trying to say is good... you just need to work on the proper song format :) tell me when you make your improvments!! I would love to read it when it's done!! :) good luck!! :D
reply