MayWinner
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1 decade ago
Again, I really like it. You're writing style is really good, but it could use a bit more description (it's a pain only so many characters can be used).
And to be honest, this sounds an awful lot like Katniss' story... But it *is* a fanfic and not your own world, so.. haha. :) reply
MayWinner
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1 decade ago
I love the idea; it's interesting.
But why would she take out 60 tesserae? reply
caitiecatforever
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1 decade ago
this is so sad, and so good :')
keep writinggg :D reply
Alexandra_babe
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1 decade ago
the girls are always picked first... just saying reply
xsdsoulx
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1 decade ago
This is actually very good! I love how u incorporated the song (or poem?) in there. Can't wait to read Chapter 2 :D reply
MayWinner · 1 decade ago
Again, I really like it. You're writing style is really good, but it could use a bit more description (it's a pain only so many characters can be used).
And to be honest, this sounds an awful lot like Katniss' story... But it *is* a fanfic and not your own world, so.. haha. :)
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MayWinner · 1 decade ago
I love the idea; it's interesting.
But why would she take out 60 tesserae?
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caitiecatforever · 1 decade ago
this is so sad, and so good :')
keep writinggg :D
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Alexandra_babe · 1 decade ago
the girls are always picked first... just saying
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xsdsoulx · 1 decade ago
This is actually very good! I love how u incorporated the song (or poem?) in there. Can't wait to read Chapter 2 :D
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